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Feeling Fuzzy, Tasting Colors

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When Rainbow Dash find Scootaloo lonely on Hearth's Warming, she doesn't hesitate to cheer her up in her own special way. A brief but heartwarming saga of grand larceny and breaking and entering later finds Scootaloo sufficiently cheery, and that's all that matters.

Written for Leviathan Eclipse for Jinglemas 2023

Credit goes to AuroraDawn for the original premise of "Rainbow Factory"

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Leviathan Eclipse #1 · Dec 25th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Definitely an interesting concept. I'd personally like to see where you could take this. Overall I liked it and it was a decent first story. I've written a few non pony stories myself and I also have tons of other pony fiction projects. I'd like to see how you evolve as a writer. You seem to have a unique take on the show I haven't seen before.

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