Derpy Hooves, a Pegasus Known for her distinctive crossed eyes and endearing clumsiness, is among the best flyers in Equestria. Following in her father's footsteps, she dreamt of becoming a Wonderbolt.
An unexpected turn of events would lead to her becoming everyponies most beloved mailmare
Credit to DeviantArt user "spikeslashrarity" and his research on Derpy, which I used in this piece.
Editor: Skylarking the Stargazer https://www.fimfiction.net/user/229362/Skylarking+the+Stargazer
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You forgot "nothing"
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Thank you, I appreciate the help.
Not a bad little story, but kind of telly.
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No prob👍
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Too telly? I'll have to consider that. It kinda feels like it has to be done like this when it's done from a first person perspective. Maybe I need to dial back on telling, not showing regardless.
Cute little story, mate.
Also, it's hard to believe that Derpy wanted to become a Wonderbolt in her young days. But hey, some dreams are wilder than others.
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Thank you. I like fleshing out underdeveloped aspects of the show.