• Member Since 28th Feb, 2022
  • offline last seen April 22nd

MysticSkies115


Just a Transwoman fanfic writer with weird kinks and a NSFW mind at times

Comments ( 2 )

Well, at least Hyper can now use the highway as slip and slide when it rains. LOL

If I can give a bit of constructive criticism, your punctuation/paragraphing could use some works. Some of your sentence run on for quite a while, and a few of your paragraphs feel like they lack parsable breaks.

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