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DarkShadowSpark
Pone - about 50/50% sound/insane :) - Humans are lame, Pones are best
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Hmmmm interesting.
That was a good story.
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Thanks
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Certainly
Reminds me of Doomfister's work, with prose constantly going in circles and being rather full of itself to try to embellish the situation while meting out the details. Honestly...not my cup of tea, I think it ruins it to be so out of order and skimp on details of the main event. It's also a bit too telly rather than showy, particularly with the sentient fat part.
As some advice, usually you want a character there to watch and talk with the focus character in situations like this, it can avoid needing pure narration to describe everything. Spike would've been perfect for this, since Twilight hasn't eaten him, and he's her assistant who would logically be around to help anyways.
And as for something that would be easy to fix...entirely spoilering warnings tends to defeat a lot of their purpose, and you really don't need to describe every aspect. I would think something more like this would work well:
Content warning: Mostly-willing fatal vore with detailed digestion, resulting in sentient fat.
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Well your not wrong with that. It is inspired by doomfister´s work and wasńt my personal cup of tea either. (Nice that someone finally figured it out that my digestion scenes are inspired mostly by doomfister. The TF ones are tfsential just by the way) I just dont think I am suited for graphic vore and cruel stuff. Thats a think I will leave mostly to him. His storys are good, but also not as the cruelty in it isnt something I can actually enjoy. It was a try and why shouldnt I write down the ideas I have? Might actually work out. Thanks for your comment anyway, it was worth a shot. I think I will revert back to absorption, kinder styles of vore (e.a. willing ones), and tf, that seems to work out more for me
Hm that bit with Spike isnt an actually so bad idea, I might be able to implement that to one of my other storys. I have one that features this kind of vore a second time. (Dont know how it will turn out in the end, if it ever will be finished or stuff like that, but we will see)
Well I made the content warning so extensive because surely there would be people complaining if I didńt, but let me chance it to yours. Makes it more "myterious"
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I see. I think Doomfister's approach works better when you want to hammer in the cruelty, tho I think he definitely overdoes it, and so probably isn't too fitted to your preferences.
And on the warnings, it's more important to unspoiler the main point (digestion and vore in this case) than to limit what you warn about (though that's a good idea too), as the idea is people can get a preliminary warning of the basic subject, something that won't upset them right away, then look at individual spoilered bits if they feel they need more information, accepting the information potentially upsetting them.