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DiscordantDisciple


Breaking FIMfiction norms one chapter at a time.

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Anon had been staying in Equestria about a month now but now he was starting to get nervous. When he had been asked if he wanted to be transported to Equestria he was ecstatic! But now that he's run out of his most precious item from home, his supply of testosterone, he's feeling glum.

That is, until he learns something interesting about Equestria from a certain purple alicorn.

Anon is transmasc in this story, don't like that? Then don't read it.


Marked mature only for the final word. Better safe than sorry.

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Comments ( 11 )

transmasc

Don’t you mean transgender?

Not my cup of tea but it is pretty good especially with only 1000 ish words. Tells an interesting story.

11661996
transmasc stands for trans masculine which is a trans person who identifies as masculine

Just a heads up, you probably don't need the sex tag on this. I think that's why the ratio is so off set.

The story was good tho.

Nah I think this is rated T for Teens.... but I could be wrong well... since the Simsons were p13... and even they placed a child's penis in the movie... So... The story is great... There is no sex... But I think the downvotes are from transmasc... The best option is to ask a moderator though.

Was gonna send this for the 1000 words contest but it ended like a week ago. :facehoof:

You really should have entered this story in that contest! :twilightsmile: :raritydespair:

There were a few errors of grammar here and there but otherwise, this was really funny.

“Don’t worry it’s perfectly safe for all kinds of creatures. I went through that spell myself when I was a filly and-”

You wouldn’t use regular dashes here when em dashes would do.

“Hold on, 1, you’re trans?! 2, you were a filly? Isn’t that kinda decision a bit big for a filly?”

Spell out the numbers as words. Also you meant “first” and “second” for clarity.

“Woll” Twilight grimaced and pulled Anon’s hands away from her face with magic, “Well you can have it done right now! I know the spell.”

Typo.
11711005 These are the ones I spotted.

I half expected the spell to turn him into a colt (not a filly, because that would be cruel).

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Thanks, those last two were intentional but thank you for catching the first one!

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