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NorthProduction678


I love stories and ponies, and I hope that as I write, you give me constructive criticism so I can become a better entertainer, and a better writer. Just don’t be mean about it.

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Twilight and her friends are pulled from different timelines from the show to view their past, present, and future, and hopefully stop some big mistakes from happening.

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Although this is a trope that has been in a lot of fandoms, I’ve never seen it in mlp. So this should be interesting.

This is gonna be VERY interesting!

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I know, although if I’m being honest, even though there are a lot. I’ve rarely come across one that actually good. Like tons of spelling errors, grammatically incorrect, a ton of OOC moments in their reactions that just feel like straw-man from the writer.

And the watcher (my personal name for the type of character that brings other characters to the place to watch the thing) can get really annoying if they constantly interrupt the characters who already have a complicated relationship, or just give exposition after exposition. Like in my time I think I’ve only come two good ones. One being Stranger Things, and the other being Hamilton. That’s just my thoughts.

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I actually haven’t noticed that.

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While I do find the trope interesting I sometimes feel like the watchher would be bias. Willing to point out the flaws of some characters while leaving some alone.

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Exactly. And that is so unbelievably annoying. Anyhow, as for this fanfic, going through 200+ pieces of content, while trying to keep everyone in character is going to be one hell of a ride

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Don’t forget to call out some of the characters, because sunset looks like she’s gonna need that a lot.

“Uh, Pinkie, ya do know we don’t have to eat anything, right?” Applejack asked, looking to her right.

Doesn’t mean you can’t eat.

“Thank you Spike, but I still shouldn’t have lost my patience with you. Your young and your still learning, and I shouldn’t have yelled at you.” Sunset groaned softly at the sappy scene. ‘ Why am I even here?’ she thought.

Someone smack sunset.

“I know her name is Mayer Mare, but isn’t her real name Ivory Scrolls?” Fluttershy asked.

Really?

“Well, after Pinkie Pie’s celebration party, she told me that Nightmare Moon had surprised her and banished her to the sun. Princess Celestia didn’t even have time to react.”

Cool

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