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NorthProduction678

I love stories and ponies, and I hope that as I write, you give me constructive criticism so I can become a better entertainer, and a better writer. Just don’t be mean about it.

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Starswirl the Beardless
Starswirl the Beardless #1 · Sep 11th, 2022 · · ·
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I'm not sure what to say about this story, since it's essentially just an AU loredump. There's not really a plot to it, just a long list of events presented in a very fast-paced manner, and the events themselves weren't particularly interesting. If you want to write an AU, that's fine, but make sure that what you're adding actually benefits the story in some way. This is a good attempt at a first story, but you should try to step up your game a bit for your next one.

NorthProduction678
NorthProduction678 #2 · Sep 11th, 2022 · · ·
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To be honest, this was basically so I don’t have to wait for approval for the next one. Thanks for your constructive criticism 😊

NorthProduction678
NorthProduction678 #3 · Oct 12th, 2023 · · ·
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Well, what do you think of the other story I wrote, or are you not a fan of watch it fics?

Starswirl the Beardless
Starswirl the Beardless #4 · Oct 12th, 2023 · · ·
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I have not read your other story. I will take a look at it when/if I have the interest.

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