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Diloboi


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One morning, fluttershy wakes up to realize she’s no longer in her cottage, or in Ponyville for that matter. On top of that, she’s not even a pony anymore!

In the body of the wasteland’s apex predator, she’ll have to adapt to her new form and the world around her.

(Imagine a slimmer, more upright, more huggable, less hunched over deathclaw, with less grotesque features)

Inspired by: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/475593/queen-of-the-wasteland

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 15 )

I'm interested in this story ^_^ kinda difficult to find crossover stories on this site

Don't give up on the story man. I can see I can see great potential in this fanfic crossover. I mean Fluttershy has ability to tame any wild animal or mythical beasts like Cerberus. So I think it can help work on the wasteland creatures. Her abilities can help guide safe passage in the wasteland without fighting other wasteland creatures and not wasting ammunition. Not to mention she communicate with them and ask for assistance like finding hidden resources or way out of any problematic situation that they're in. Though if there's a problem with any wasteland critter she can always stare them down to submission including humans.Not to mention she can also give great comfort to anyone that feels down or depressed like a service animal. Has every ability of a death claw like. Speed she might not have her wings but with the body of a deathclaw she's fast enough to avoid any upcoming attacks and help the team by diverting the enemy attention. Strength: she can help carry any material that the vault-dweller can't carry or push or lift any material blocking their path and like it or like you're not she can take down enemies with her big strong claws and tail. Though she'll only attack if someone hurts innocent animals or her friends.Armor: her yellow scale Hind can protect her from incoming fire. Except for the belly. So watch out for that Fluttershy. So you see there is so much potential in this fanfic please don't give up on this.

Not to mention there isn't a lot of fallout fanfics related to fallout 4. Not a single one of them is completed.

I know it must be tough finding the inspirational to write more chapters of your stories, because of a lot of things like school, career and life. I know you're doing your very best to make time for your stories and I know you're going to come with new stories. It's just there's always a lot of good fanfic stories that are either incomplete for a very long time, on hiatus or canceled. I just don't want this story to be unfinished or canceled. I know I'm asking a lot but I'm telling you it has potential.

This is a very interesting premise — Fluttershy, a sweet and kind pony who couldn’t hurt a fly turned into the hellish creature of death who haunts the nightmares of all who played New Vegas.

Seems fun.

OMG this was such a fun first chapter. Having this Fallout and MLP crossover opened up while laying with my cats was such a satisfying way to relax at night. PLEASE, if you can, continue the series. It has so much potential!

Love this so far, can't wait for the next chapter.

Please continue write more chapters for this story. I have a few ideas to upgrade our little deathclaw shy. First you should give her a bit of armor on her weak spot which is the belly of course. Second will help her make her understand in this new world she's in.

If you need more help writing more chapters.please don't be afraid to ask what the next chapter should be about and which side quests should they take?

Looking good so far! Though, I’ll be honest, I wouldn’t have expected anyone to immediately associate a deathclaw with a vault dweller. Having played New Vegas and 3, my first reaction would be to run the heck away and shoot.

It would’ve been an interesting conflict to have Preston freak out and shoot Fluttershy on account of her being, well, a giant murder lizard who could, lore wise, go toe-to-toe with a behemoth. But it’s not the end of the world, and there’s plenty of time for conflict.

Well this should prove interesting. Fluttershy as a Deathclaw in Concord. Preston Garvey's gonna have a heart attack. Or maybe Mama Murphy, unless she foresaw this...

So you're taking inspiration from Queen of the Wasteland? Cool! Different game different character, not to mention the ability to speak, this is looking good so far! I wonder if she can still talk to animals, or if she can communicate with other Deathclaws. Can't wait to see what happens next!

It has started of pretty good. Hope you continue it. 🙂

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