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Sunlight star

Twilight and Celestia Stan. No alicorn slander allowed. I'm just a teen trying to share my ideas and hopefully make enjoyable content for a rainy day :D she/her severely questioning my identity

Sunlight star Joined 18th Feb, 2023 · Offline

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Sunnydlight
Sunnydlight #1 · Jul 28th, 2023 · · ·
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Cute short story! I like it! :twilightsmile:

Sunlight star
Sunlight star #2 · Jul 28th, 2023 · · ·
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Thank you so much! I'm quite new to writing is I'm just trying out different styles!

bkc56
bkc56 #3 · Sep 9th, 2023 · · ·
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You acknowledged it in your note, but I think finding a proofreader or editor to review your stories would be very helpful. Understanding the reason for the suggestions they make would help you improve your writing (it has for me).

Bicyclette
Bicyclette #4 · Sep 18th, 2023 · · ·
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She ran in frantically. She looked towards the bed, there she seen a small violet alicorn, and the sight was far from pretty. Twilight was shaking, breathing heavily, and sweating badly all whilst staying asleep.

aww, poor Twilight!

“It's just, ever since my friends and I defeated Tirek I've felt different. I've tried to ignore it but I just can't.” She cried as her eyes began to swell with tears, “No matter what I do, it just sits in the back of my mind, I mean Tirek almost won at my hooves, what princess would I be if I let a villain win?”

oof, yeah. Twilight won in the end but that doesn’t mean it wasn’t a traumatizing experience!

“You're a strong pony Twilight, and I'm sure Celestia thinks that as well. You need to stop putting I much pressure on yourself.”

so true

“Maybe in another life Twilight.” Luna murmured. Sometimes she thought of what her life could've been, if her parents hadn't of died so soon, if she hadn't became Nightmare Moon, and if she wasn't banished to the moon.

aww, we all wonder such things sometimes. thank you for writing!

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