I've been a brony for 11 years since January 19th, 2013. Chip 'N Dale fan for 2 years, as well as a furry for 12 years. Male pronouns. Not taking any story requests at all.
You find Scootaloo crying all alone in their clubhouse, so you went to see what's bothering her soo much. Little does you know that this'll become soo much more.
This story idea is from listening to the song One is All, All is One from FMA Brotherhood.
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Kinda good man, but it does need a bit of work.
It is sweet, but a little too meta. The over-explaining needs to be taken down a bit, and there needs to be a bit more depth and scene-building.
It's a sweet story, but a little too simplified.
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There'll be a sequel for this story. But I don't know when I'll be writing it.