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Scorch234


I'm not as great of a writer like everybody else but I try the best I can when writing my stories so if you read my stories and have any tips on how I can better my writing I'll greatly appreciate it

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What would happen if a young girl with a brilliant mind in robotic engineering ends up equestria and in the hooves of its leader. Would the girl conquer the kingdom as her own or will she save it and those that watched over her when she arrived.

Proper nouns like "Equestria" should always be capitalized. Also, questions (such as these two sentences) should end in question marks.

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Thank you for the tip it's appreciated :twilightsmile:

Looking forward to the next chapter keep up the good work

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Thanks and I'm planning on making the second chapter

Is that suppose to be Eggman but a girl?

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No, its apparently a relative of Ivo's. Probably niece or such. She's not entirely canon though.

Seems that this dudette will have a most exelant adveture.

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No she's a fan character that was inspired by sonic mania from one of the boss battles where Eggman was piloting a robotic spider he made and since he was upside-down while in it, it also unintentionally created eggette/omelette if you looked at it
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Yeah she will

oh joy] Twi: What are we going to do today? // Eggatha: What we do every night Sparkle, try to take over the world!

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Lol pinky and the brain reference

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Celly: ”Giiirls? Did you try to make a world conquering-death-construct-doohickey again? Again?”
Twi&Omelette: ”… nooo…?”

"Oh you're tight I must get back home." Sapphire says looking at the clock too before turning to Celestia and bowing. "I'm looking forward to watching over Omelette again tomorrow, your highness."

that sound vary sugestive.:scootangel:


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They 'er Twilight & Omelette, yes, Twilight & Omelette...🎶
Bothe are gineie and nither is quit sane...🎶
Too prove their ponye worth the'll overtrhow the Earth...🎶
They'er Twilight... Twilight & Omelette... lette... lette...🎶

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Oh shoot thanks for telling me I can't believe I missed that also

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Lol

Read it and loved it to death. I'm working on my own "female relative of Robotnik" story. I honestly wish there were more stories about Eggette/Omelette.

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Thanks and I wish you the best of luck in writing your own version of Eggette/ Omelette story and I wish the same thing

I love this to no end! Keep up the good work, buddy!

What is the robotnik legacy?

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Thanks really appreciate it
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its what this story is based off of

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