I'm not as great of a writer like everybody else but I try the best I can when writing my stories so if you read my stories and have any tips on how I can better my writing I'll greatly appreciate it
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Proper nouns like "Equestria" should always be capitalized. Also, questions (such as these two sentences) should end in question marks.
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Thank you for the tip it's appreciated
Looking forward to the next chapter keep up the good work
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Thanks and I'm planning on making the second chapter
Is that suppose to be Eggman but a girl?
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No, its apparently a relative of Ivo's. Probably niece or such. She's not entirely canon though.
Seems that this dudette will have a most exelant adveture.
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No she's a fan character that was inspired by sonic mania from one of the boss battles where Eggman was piloting a robotic spider he made and since he was upside-down while in it, it also unintentionally created eggette/omelette if you looked at it
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Yeah she will
oh joy] Twi: What are we going to do today? // Eggatha: What we do every night Sparkle, try to take over the world!
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Lol pinky and the brain reference
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Celly: ”Giiirls? Did you try to make a world conquering-death-construct-doohickey again? Again?”
Twi&Omelette: ”… nooo…?”
that sound vary sugestive.
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They 'er Twilight & Omelette, yes, Twilight & Omelette...🎶
Bothe are gineie and nither is quit sane...🎶
Too prove their ponye worth the'll overtrhow the Earth...🎶
They'er Twilight... Twilight & Omelette... lette... lette...🎶
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Oh shoot thanks for telling me I can't believe I missed that also
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Lol
Read it and loved it to death. I'm working on my own "female relative of Robotnik" story. I honestly wish there were more stories about Eggette/Omelette.
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Thanks and I wish you the best of luck in writing your own version of Eggette/ Omelette story and I wish the same thing
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Based!
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Yeah
I love this to no end! Keep up the good work, buddy!
What is the robotnik legacy?
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Thanks really appreciate it
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its what this story is based off of
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You're welcome