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Scorch234
I'm not as great of a writer like everybody else but I try the best I can when writing my stories so if you read my stories and have any tips on how I can better my writing I'll greatly appreciate it
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nice when will the next chapter come out?
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Thanks and I'm actually working on it
I don't understand you already use Lillian in one story why send her to another?
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It was a request from my friend they asked if I can make a story where both of our ocs were siblings and I said sure
SAPPHIRE: ALRIGHT LISTEN UP ASSHOLES IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT THEN JUST LEAVE IT ALONE DON'T COMMENT ON MY FRIENDS STORY AND DONT HIT THE DISLIKE BUTTON HE WORKED VERY HARD ON THIS ABD YOU MEAN ASSHOLES ARE KILLING HIS SPIRIT TO KEEP GOING SO KNOCK IT OFF AND LEAVE HIM ALONE WHO THE FUCK CARES IF ITS CRINGY OR NOT AND HAS A SPELLING ERRORS ITS SPECIAL AND THE STORY MEANS ALOT TO ME SO STOP BEING RUDE AND LEAVE MY FRIEND ALONE
Is the artwork all you? Or someone else made it?
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It's all me why do you ask?
Hmm... It's okay.. There are errors here and there but it's easily fixable. Other then that, I'll keep an eye on this story. Hope to see more.
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Thanks I'll try to make sure there aren't errors in the next chapter
Well this was a good starting off point, admittedly it has the whole human/humans coming to equestria because of a merchant but that's okay and I don't really see a logical way for them to get there but fuck logic. Anyway can't wait to see what happens since in my opinion this has the potential to be really good.
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Thanks for your honest opinion on the story I appreciate it
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Your welcome and also it's written pretty good too in my opinion.
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Thanks I did put all my heart into this story I even double check my story for any spelling errors and fixed them before posting the story
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Well if you're putting your heart into it then that's good, better to write something you like then hate. Hopefully some day I can make a story on here but right now I can't. But anyway I'm looking forward to future chapter's and I hope you have a good day👋
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Thanks and I'm sure you'll make a great story some day
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Just curious. And thanks for the follow
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K and np
More please?
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Working on the second chapter
More please?
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There will be more I promise still writing out the second chapter
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*facepalm* Chill out, will you?
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that's how they talk actually sorry if it looks like they're yelling
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Yikes... Canterlot Voice much?
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Yeah but you'll get used to it
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Well this chapter surprised me a little, like I thought that this was just going to be only the two twins but no you get a girl and her boyfriend sent their with her being a cat and him a wolf. Also I'm glad that now the story is sort of out of the introduction phase, there's still probably a lot to go but at least we can see probably what their do next since being stuck there.
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Yeah the two other characters was my Co author and editor idea but glade you like the story
Sorry for not posting any new chapters yet been busy
Do any of the female characters in this story throw any punches?
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If you mean do any of them fight than yes of course I'm still trying to learn on writing good fight scenes in the story
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Girl calm your ass that is a block button you know
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Sorry that's how my friend talks they talk with all caps
More
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I'm actually working on the next chapter but it's going to take time
More good
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Thanks
More good
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Thank you very much I put my heart and soul into this story and I'm grateful that displacedwriter helped me with this chapter
Your welcome
More good
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Thank you I'm happy to see you like my story
Maybe use ["hr"] instead, without the "
That is how it looks and it don't get picked up by the text to speech function.
Day one action? Poor Family had to play the hard way.
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Thanks for the tip
I expect more changes or twists in those events, but it was entertaining non the less.
I wonder what abilities, knowledge and personality all characters have.
Luna really just accepted without stipulations?
I would at least have demanded a personal royal harem to make up for 1000 missed heat seasons
Shouldn't they go trough Equestria educational system first?
You know... Reading, writing, math, history, laws to follow and the protection they enjoy as...
Are they citizens?
They are technically aliens...
Twilight isn't nibbling their ears off in questions?
Rarity isn't talking Shop with alien fashion designers?!
Scandalous
What do the monetary system look like:
Example:
- Copper 100 coins = 1 Iron
- Iron 100 coins = 1 Silver
- Silver 100 coins = 1 Gold
- Gold 100 Coins = 1 Aluminum
- Aluminum etc etc etc
Etc etc?
Maybe add informationto the three weeks of timeskip.
Maybe they spend it learning about their bodys and going through basic education?
We readers would like to know it to...
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Descriptions pretty please?
Spike first seem to be disinterested, than he changed his mind towards the end out of nowhere...
Maybe give him a reason to be suddenly exited about his Ticket?