Huh this looks interesting

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Okay, I can understand people downvoting a story they don't like, but why would they downvote a random innocuous comment? O.o

i'm left feeling hanging with what happens with Ocellus and her friends; i feel like the return was breezed over a bit too quickly. a core part of Ocellus's character is her close bond with her friends, so without more justification, her just being stuck to Tixi permanently now feels weird. also, is Ocellus just permanently magically stunted (aka she can't learn magic since she's bound as a familiar) now?

i guess i just don't feel enough resolution on Ocellus's end of the narrative

nevertheless, cool and quite underrated fic!

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She's an improved familiar so she can slowly get stronger, but yeah it's holding her back. And the epilogue implies there's a permanent portal where they can just go visit.

But yeah I feel like the second half of the story is missing something but I sat on it for a few days and couldn't figure it out.

Oh dear.

There is a permanent portal to Varisia, for Angel Bunny, the CMC, Derpy, and Pinkie to go visit and deliver chaos?

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Ayup.

I mean, Varisia needs more chaos, right?

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Im just thinking of Spike going over an finding out he now has 12 levels of Dragon, Half Dragon Half Fey Half Pony Half Werewolf, and due to Twilights Girls universe side got Half Human Feats and Abilities through Adoption etc?

Ouch. Thats gonna be messy to work through even using the heavy Computer generator. Which used to include Ponyfinder but it wasnt set up correctly so pulled.

Nice story!