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Comrade Abigor


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Okay, this is a good lined up of evil main six. I think choosing cupcake pinky is a little bit too much though since he's broken in the sense of her skills and abilities. On top of all the things he has to out new for everybody, she's basically a discord herself. But cannot wait to read

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I needed to have at least one cupcake style killer in the team and who better than the actual Pinkamena. I also think Evil Pinkie is broken no matter what version. Heck even good and normal Pinkie is broken. But if you stop and think despite being as crazy as Discord she's basically just a sadistic torturer. Really wonder if she has any fighting skills to begin with.

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She's not really that powerful, just unpredictable. She's actually more of a hybrid between Hannibal Lecter and The Joker. Cunning, cannibalistic, treacherous, charismatic, chaotic, pretty much every bit of personality of those two.

However, like them, she shares one weakness: she's mortal. She's not an alicorn; she's an earth pony. She will grow old and die, or can just be killed off like anyone else.

There's a REASON why she's calculative in her actions. Even she knows that if authorities or even Celestia were to find out about her crimes, she'd be a fugitive on the run.

Twilight: Twilight's dollhouse

Why use that Twilight? Why not use the one from the one where she tortures her friends, drives them all insane and kills them but they live on as ghosts who want revenge on Twilight?

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I'm not sure I am familiar with that one. Besides i like Dollmaker Twilight. Plus if it's too cupcakes type i ain't using it i want the killers to be diverse. And Dollmaker Twilight clashes quite good with Butterflies Fluttershy i would say, wouldn't you agree?

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Discord said it the best. Even I, the Lord of chaos cannot predict. What would Pinky do next. She is omnipotent knowing what's going on in her universes and others outside the MLP storyline. She quite literally read ahead of her own story. She it's already an earth pony one of the most sturdy and strongest out of all the ponies. She is quite literally the most athletic out of her friend group, even rainbow. She has a photographic memory and has staged supplies outside of Equestria and inside. She is One of the only two characters that has actually claimed to have a fighting style. She basically has teleportation as well and and she has the pinky since which is basically a more broken version of the Spidey sense. Because it can tell her pacifically what is going on in her surroundings. And above all of that, this pinky seems to be a prodigy in the most dangerous pony with a knife. Let's not even talk about her ability to lie and trick people. But the most dangerous thing about her is her ability not to hesitate. She has all the best traits for a killer wrapped in the cotton candy unexpecting fluff ball. If all that isn't a sign of being completely in utterly broken, I don't know what broken is.

hmmm, interesting so far.

Ok this is awesome I can't wait to read more, and I think rainbow dash would hate her evil counterpart the most because of what she did to scootaloo

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Oh yeah i think everyone would hate a eugenist nazi. But most especially if that eugenist nazi is your cosmic twin. That's like insult to injury.

I like how in the picture Starlight just fucking dies!
Rarity what have you done???

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Lmao nah she just didn't get an evil alternate

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Starlight lacking an evil-counterpart is actually grounds for creative opportunity. Heck, considering how she was in the show, you can have it be revealed that her evil-self was the true mastermind all along.

"The player never reveals themselves to the pawns, that just makes the pawns think too much. I do the thinking, they simply move according to my whims."

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I'm gonna humor you and see if i can eventually introduce an evil Starlight Glimmer into the story at some point. I even have a candidate grimdark in mind already. No promises tho.

"I can help with that-" Pinkie started but was stoped by the other Pinkie.

Nice.

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Yeah those two help each other out in their own ways, Pinkie helps Pinkamena control her killing habits and Pinkamena slays all who dare upset Pinkie lol.


Jokes aside, yes Pinkie is very much aware of her twins true nature.

Just waiting for an update

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I'm so sorry I'm just caught in a bit of a dilemma with this story that's preventing me from posting the next six chapters I'll try to solve it as soon as possible

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I highly doubt the mad Mane Six will like being called "pawns". :unsuresweetie:

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I mean, in the grand scheme they are pawns let's face the facts

I'm going to be honest, in the Mad Six group I didn't know anything about Applejack or Fluttershy, their background is interesting, I also have a question, chronologically at what point in the series does this story take place? I take as reference the end of season 6 (since we can see that Discord and Starlight get along) and before season 8 (since there is no mention of friendship school). I'm also interested in what Celestia and Luna's experiences have been regarding Volo.

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My friend, you live glorious day

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I'm going to be honest, in the Mad Six group I didn't know anything about Applejack or Fluttershy, their background is interesting

I will be honest. Those two were the hardest to find an evil twin to. Apparently they aren't all that much used. And as for their background I have had to fill in blanks since evil Applejack doesn't have much in terms of backstory in the original story. But hey, creative potential.

chronologically at what point in the series does this story take place? I take as reference the end of season 6 (since we can see that Discord and Starlight get along) and before season 8 (since there is no mention of friendship school).

That's about right I would say.

I'm also interested in what Celestia and Luna's experiences have been regarding Volo.

Not particularly pleasant

This is an amazing concept with really damn good execution! As a fan of Twilight's dollhouse, I think her characterization was very accurate, and and i had never heard of the applejack fic you used, and after giving a quick read I've got to say although I think the story itself is neutral I think it makes a lot of sense it's a choice for this concept. Im also for evil fluttershy, i would have personally used the "angel of death" fluttershy especially since in my mind "butterflies" is a fic that's extremely similar to "cupcakes" at least in concept, this isn't really a complaint more as just I won an excuse to mention Angel of Death cus I think it's really well written, keep up the good work! (Also pinkie shutting down her murder counterpart purely because it's "not that point in the story yet" is hilarious)

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Im also for evil fluttershy, i would have personally used the "angel of death" fluttershy

I have not read that one tbh.

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Kind of figured, it's extremely underrated in my opinion and characterizes "evil Fluttershy" in a really compelling way that helps it stand out. Once again I didn't expect you to have used it but more I just wanted an excuse to bring it up because of how underrated it is

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Link? Cause I can't seem to be able to find it.

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I got the name wrong! The story is called "angel of mercy" it should just come up if you search that (bc yknow, it's the correct title) but just incase it doesn't heres a link to a reading https://youtu.be/PIEWKy1TmjA sorry for being dumb :3

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Oooooh that. Yeah I know that one. Haven't read it yet but I don't doubt it's good. What's her method operatis?(talking of about Fluttershy of that story)

it should just come up if you search that

Idk, I got some story about some pony on a fighter plane lol.

sorry for being dumb :3

We all be dumb sometimes no worries:twilightsmile:

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The angel of Mercy Fluttershy's main gimmick is that she doesn't want to kill people but only ever does it so they don't have prolonged suffering, for example Applejack (who is the victim of the story) comes to Fluttershy's house with a deathly illness that will likely have dragged out pain for months before resulting in death, so Fluttershy decides to kill Applejack so she doesn't have to suffer through the pain of the illness even though there is a chance Applejack could have recovered. In short angel of Mercy Fluttershy just wants to minimize suffering. Don't really know how much more I can say without making this comment two paragraphs which given my rambly nature I try to avoid doing.

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Okay I can see that also working in this story, it does the job of clashing with Dollmaker Twilight ideologically which is the plan I have for Butterflies Fluttershy.

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Ohh cool! Im excited to see how this fic pans out! Keep up the good work! (also no evil spike? Joking, i know that there's nothing for that)

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also no evil spike? Joking, i know that there's nothing for that

Quite the contrary. I just don't feel like I want r@pe to be that much part of this story.

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when i say there's nothing i meant more like, story's about spike murdering people, I looked for smth like that (for reference for a grimdark parody im writing) and the """"best"""" I found was the aforementioned SA storys. Feels bad :(

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Feels bad indeed.

It's like the best they can do with Spike is r#pe godzilla.

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Mhm, it's the main reason I chose Spike to be the killer in the horror comedy fic I'm currently writing. (The other being he works very well for the twist i have planned) (also this is not a plug, especially since the story isn't out yet and might not be for like a month depending on my motivation)

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Do notify me when it does come out. I'd like to read something dark with Spike being the baddie but without him being all rapezilla.

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