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creativeusername34

creativeusername34 #1 · Jan 17th, 2022 · 2 · ·

' Don't be afraid. Just go away. Fade to black. Go away and don't come back[/b '

you didn't close the square bracket on [/ b], closing it should fix bold

Comrade Abigor #2 · Jan 17th, 2022 · · ·

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Why, thank you for telling

PuzzlingInsanity

PuzzlingInsanity #3 · Feb 17th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Is the anagram "desperate fool"?

Comrade Abigor #4 · Feb 18th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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*Yoda voice* Insane at puzzles, indeed you are

Sorry, i couldn't resist when i read your name lol

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PuzzlingInsanity #5 · Feb 18th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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You're good, it's funny.

Miniunleashed #6 · Jun 25th, 2022 · · ·

I think you need an editor... Not just for the grammar, but for the story itself. There is something off about the story setup that just feels off to me. Like the flow of it is off. I can't pinpoint it but i feel it.

Also just throwing this out there, you didn't mention Flurry Heart.

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