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Mirrored Realities


*Insert horribly offensive joke here.* Ha ha, wow, good one me.

Comments ( 31 )

I like it, but what the hell is paper armor?

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It's like full plate but instead of steel, it's rune inscribed paper. Both stronger and lighter than steel. Great in the medieval style combat they get into, not so good in a fire fight.

Keep writing you dingus. Consider yourself yelled at.

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A 'fire' fight good one:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Fight the good fight -ThreeDawg

Anyways continue the story since it's really good

Not too bad. In fact, I think you might have a plausible story on your hands.

Killing caribou rapists with super ultra powerful human weopons.......SOUNDS AWESOME TO ME!!! :pinkiehappy:

Hmmm, now this could be interesting. I'm looking forward to what you have in store. Also:

Well, them being deer people and having lightsabers is new, but he’s had plenty of normal people waving not-lightsabers around, so it’s kanda the same.

I think it's supposed to be "kinda" rather than "kanda".

This chapter I like it *smashes... Something off screen* Another!

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Fixed, thanks for the heads up.

This looks like it could be interesting.

Looking good! Will definitely keep an eye on this, cheers :twilightsmile:

Patiently waiting..........

HURRY THE FUCK UP!!!!!!

all seriousness though, i cant wait for the next chapter

Something something comments something something opinions.

... Navarone comes to mind with this. he ain't no hero in here. he just want to survive.

Well, I'm interested. You have my devoted attention.

Salvation. A story without the pussy whipped bullshit!

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Took me a minute to find it, but fixed it.

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Sorry if I sounded like an arse, but that was funny

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It's fine, I laughed too when I saw it.

So far, so good. Keep it up.:pinkiehappy:

This has my attention. Good idea, the best tip for writing any of us could give ya would be this... Keep writing. You will only get better by doing, so keep getting better!
Now to see how this adventure goes!
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This, this looks like fun I'm already grinning and I can't seem to stop. :pinkiehappy:

Get the next chapter out already, asshole.

See? I yelled at you. I did my part.

HURRY UP YOU FUCKTARD!

Well did my part and i like this story so far.

So far I haven't noticed any grammer mistakes nor any missing words, good job man in lookong forward to more.

I like it. Do more, please.

I need more this is good

HURRY UP AND GET ANOTHER CHAPTER

Aight, i gotta ask if you soon finished

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