Rarity and Rainbow Dash don't like each other very much. However, they are both elements of harmony, so they decide this is a problem that needs to be fixed. Rather than have Twilight set up a sleepover, the pair go off for a weekend of hanging out and getting to know each other better. The only question is: how are the two most dissimilar ponies in Equestria going to spend ten minutes with each other, let alone a whole weekend?
I like. It's pretty rare to find a fic with decent grammar, nice plot line, and non-ooc ponies in the new stories column by a rather unknown author. Tracking, and this actually has a chance at the feature box! Good luck and good day, sir!
Is this... Real? 0.0 MY GOD. MY. GOD.
I GOT FIRST YAY!
To me, it just felt like a wall of text. Which it was. That makes it tougher for some people to read.
It was also rather short, but still pretty good.
1340418 Thank you for the feedback, and yes, you are first. Not only that, you're the first comment on my first story, so you got first twice.
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There! It took me months, but I was finally able to figure out how to add chapters! I'm sure that sounds ridiculous, but I don't care, because I finally did it!
more or your arrested
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Don't worry, I'm writing up the next chapter right now.
I would like to see more more frequently.