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When Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash are asked to foal-sit the Cutie Mark Crusaders for the afternoon, only Pinkie seems to be particularly happy about it. However, the day will quickly turn into something that is both horrible and wonderful at the same time. Are any of these ponies ready? Probably not, but they're going to do it anyway. This is the story of what happens when you let Pinkie Pie read.

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Well that was weird. I had a little trouble following who was speaking.

:rainbowlaugh: Funny, I loved the bit with Pinkie Pie but it was all good.

But like the previous person said it was often hard to tell who was speaking, you should make it when its not obvious. Still you made me laugh (and not even merely chuck or smile like most of the funny fics on here, you actually made me laugh out loud) and that earns you a thumbs up.

Sea Pony Genocide?

1629789 Is that like a G1 reference? If that is the case, I share your video's reaction.

1630017 No it's a reference to that infamous fanfic by Seregant Sprinkles. Sea Pony Genocide doesn't sound very pleasant either though. :trixieshiftleft:

1631769 I know what Cupcakes is, I was asking if the Sea Ponies were from G1

1632043 Yes they are, there's even a song called "Call upon the Seaponies", they were perhaps the biggest stain on G1's otherwise decnet legacy. :twistnerd:

:pinkiehappy: Thanks everybody, it's nice to know I'm at least half way decent. I'll keep the comments about dialogue in mind, so thanks for that. This is really what I needed to get going and start writing more fics for here. Thanks again.

Not very well written and not really a story, just more of a random mishmash of...blurt.

I thought this was funny.

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