After an unfortunate accident renders Rainbow Dash unconscious, she wakes in a strange new world filled with hostile pony-like creatures. Stuck in a booming metropolis with unrecognizable technology and a less-than-welcoming reception from its locals, she is desperate to find a way home.
However, she quickly learns that she has bigger concerns. Unrest spreads amongst the inhabitants of this city like wildfire, and Rainbow Dash finds herself in the midst of a society teetering on the brink of revolution.
Submission for the Science Fiction Contest II.
Cover art by Gusty.
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This story was amazing. I need an update faster than a pony runs from a glue truck.
intriguing start! definitely an idea that is personally appealing to me
so true extremely Rainbow Dash especially the last sentence
oh no is this her getting Isekai’d
oh, good thing they also speak Ponish here!
well, that’s not good
as she should!
ooh that is very not good!
dang what did ponies ever do to these guys?
well at least the bed’s comfy
aww, Rainbow Dash does not understand what genre she is in at all! love her
aww, even her rescuers feel this way! what a world
if there was any time for that chaise longue it is now, Rares
aww, so this is what the Isekai looks like from the original world! poor Scootaloo, and all of Rainbow’s friends…
of all the ponies to be isekai’d to this world, Rainbow Dash is definitely the one whose mind would be blankest here!
so true
oof. the foolhardiness is definitely Rainbow Dash, but she still knows hardly anything about this culture and how to blend in!
ahaha perfect
really makes you think about Pon society
and, oof. this interaction is all too true to life, and i imagine Rainbow Dash in the human world would have similar scenes play out
ooh! so true that is how the corrupt and powerful do things
oh Rainbow Dash, never change!
also so Rainbow Dash, who is very good at learning things when not paying attention as we have seen in canon
oh Rainbow Dash, never change!
oof, sounding all too familiar, this
aww, Rainbow Crash, you should know about silly nicknames!
love how self-aware Rainbow Dash is
aww, but so many things can!
oof, classic switch
augh, poor Applejack!
oof, good thing Rainbow Dash didn’t stab him
ahahahaha love Rainbow Dash
hey, Rainbow Dash isn’t Rarity! who is she to judge?
aww, Rainbow Dash emotional support!
ooh, love these!
oof! well the existence of a rat was being talked about this whole time…
sadly, Rainbow Dash is not the best candidate to disprove that stereotype
oof, that metaphor is very on-the-nose!
yay!
and so the way this rigid hierarchy treats its workers comes back to bite them, classic. defeating evil is easy!
so true that is the effect of Princess Celestia’s name on ponies devoid of hope and life
hell yeah!
great callback
aww, Rainbow Dash gets to make her big speech!
all hail Princess Avina
so true she is the Element of Loyalty
ooh, an in-world justification for the Isekai process
aww, that is a little heartbreaking, i must admit!
and aww! really glad she got to share that moment with Avina before she left
aww, poor Rainbow! seeing such a meaningful experience of hers reduced to this
though i certainly would hope Rainbow is a bit more careful about having statues fall on her from now on!
ooh, what a twist! and a wonderful end, confirming that Rainbow Dash’s adventures were indeed real, and that maybe she will even get to see Avila again. loved how Rainbow Dash was very, very Rainbow Dash in this. thank you for writing!