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Bespectacled Brony


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When Shining Armor invites Sweetie Belle to go with him on a day trip to the Crystal Empire, she finds herself developing romantic affections for the handsome stallion! How can he tell the poor filly that there can never be anything between them without hurting her feelings? He'd better figure it out soon, because her crush on him is growing rapidly!

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Comments ( 10 )

Oh like we've never been in Sweetie's shoes before. At least I have. Used to have a crush on one of my teachers back in elementary. Never said or did anything about it obviously. But it was there.

Grew out of it eventually.

What could go wrong?

Why would you say that?????? :raritydespair:

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Thank you very much for the comment! I've actually never had that kind of experience. Most of my teachers in school were nice people, but I didn't crush on them. Let's hope Sweetie can cope!

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I used to be the person who would say that to my friends to mess with them and their reaction would be the same as yours. Characters in various episodes have been notorious for saying things to that same effect, so that bit of Rarity's diary (log) was meant to keep in line with the show's continuity. Hope to see you in the next chapter!

I dunno why all the downvotes so far. I mean if this does turn into Shining falling for Sweetie then I'm jumping ship. But so far it just seems like it gonna be a cute crush that Shining has to side line. Hijinks abound!

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Seems even the best written stories I've read get downvoted for reasons unknown. One of the great mysteries of life, I suppose. And don't worry...the story is NOT going in the direction one might dread (this is a comedy, after all), as Shining Armor is a happily married stallion!

A really good chapter! I hope u can go on with this story soon! Marked on the Tracking list already!

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Thanks so much for the support! I'll try to post the second chapter before the end of the month!

Saved it for later. This seems like a really good premise. I love crazy romantic stories, especially if they are silly ones like this. Poor Sweetie Belle, she's growing up with hormones and gets her first crush. Too bad for her is shining armor! She has good taste though.

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Thanks for checking this story out! There'll be plenty of more content to enjoy! And it's only gonna get sillier! (This IS a comedy story, after all!) Hope you stick around until the end!

Dis good, me like me smash like and follow :D

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