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Alone with my thoughts.

It’s been a few weeks since the fall formal and Sunset can’t help but wonder why the girls are being so nice to her.

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Pete100

Pete100 #1 · Mar 6th, 2023 · · ·

This makes me wonder what lines were sunset willing to cross to get what she wants.

EileenSaysHi

EileenSaysHi #2 · Mar 7th, 2023 · · ·

This is a nice, quiet bit of reflection with some nicely descriptive imagery. It might need one more edit pass, and has a few moments where it tells rather than shows (“Sunset was horrified”), but I enjoyed this little short. Thank you for writing it.

Wild Stallion