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Lakeel


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*boops!*
First comment! You're doing great ^.^

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I have been booped... I don't know how I'll ever recover now. :facehoof:

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Anything in particular you'd want to see expanded on? :twilightsheepish:

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Just please dont abandon it like so many others writers do

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its cool, I got like 2 more chapters already written, and an ending planned ^^. Just gotta fill in the rest.

the mines need laborers in the desperate search for ore.

I'm a little confused by this. Why would a Stable need ore? Why does it have a refinery? I know almost every Stable in the Fallout: Equestria world is suppose to double as some kind of science experiment, but I just can't comprehend what that could possibly be here.

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While the experiment does revolve around the stable having a mine I can't really say more as to WHY that's the experiment without spoiling later chapters. o3o;

Top notch work so far
Cant wait for more

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Mmmm yes~ moar! *rolls around in the sweet ambrosia of praise!*
(thank yee)

Not sure whether to feel bad for Calamity or laugh.

Maybe both? Probably both.

Sketchy is quickly working her way up into one of my favorite FOE protagonist. This entire chapter was pure gold.

Also, rest in power Brad

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Eeee!! *rolls around in the praise*

On a side les squealy note: Whats makes her stand out the most for you? I desire to build upon character strengths rather than covering literally every base possible...if that makes sense.

'orse 'orse 'orse 'orse 'orse 'orse 'orse 'orse 'orse 'orse !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Huh, so Sketchy is related to Pinkie…

Oh Luna she is related to Pinkie

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What did you expect when her stable is right behind the Pie family rock farm?! >:D

Just finished reading this and boy I enjoyed reading this more then expected it!

Differently going to read future chapters (:

Soooo. The roaches followed her out? Neat.

“There ain't no way they’re ALL as dangerous as you keep saying they are. Most of em’ can't even hold a gun straight, it's why they keep getting wiped out.” The middle brother retorted while wiping the world's grimiest rag along a vaguely gun-shaped amalgam of pipes and screws. His mark was the least inspired thing I think I’ve ever seen.. a singular.. gray.. rock. Just a rock… No cracks, no sword sticking out of it, nothing. “The Lightbringer, Security, the ghost, and even Lord Jerry-Can McKillsAlot or whatever his titles were are all exceptions to the rule, not the standard.”

What story is that last one?

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Unfortunately made it up...but it certainly sounds like a protagonist right? :D

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Certainly sounds like a nickname Raiders would give the latest boogeymane to come out of a stable.

“Yep! I’m your great great great greatgreatgrea-” Good goddesses fucking me sideways, she’s just like the voice and B-Rad! At least she stopped to take a gasp of air. “- Great-grandma/aunt/cousin/thing!”

Yeaaaaah. This didn't come as a surprise. I remember a mention of somepony (Thumper, I think) saying they were descended from rock breakers/farmers. I forget which.

“-se routes clearing up, trade between the Capital-Wasteland and Stalliongrad grows safer by the day. I’d still recommend bringing a coat folks, frostbite can be as deadly as any raider. In other news, President Gawd of the NCR announced today that with the new election system finalized, she will not be running for reelection. A great day for democracy indeed. Though I suspect her daughter Regina is setting up for a landslide election if the wasteland rumor mill is to be believed. Remember folks, she might get upset if you start calling her princess.”

If I didn't remember who this particular gryphon was I would be laughing at their audacity.

“Hopefully the NRC actually listened to the enclave about how to set up a proper senate. Something better than a bunch of cap-hungry savages locked in a room.” Lucy grumbled keeping pace ahead.

Considering the fact that something similar caused the war. A very legitimate concern.

“Dead as a doornail, unfortunately.” Lucy sighed and flipped her mane from her face, “Aside from a few broken remnants of pre-war nobility that is. Enclave recon reported most of their connections to the princesses were as frayed as your mane. They're just glorified hoarders waving nobility around as a justification for anything. Looting, slavery, backstabbery, art hoarding, you name it… all in the name of their ‘noble birthright’.” she air quoted with her pinion feathers.

Soooooo. Exactly the same as pre-war nobility. Got it.

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Whaaaaaat? Nooooo! The new ones don't have knights! So they're completely different! :3

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General term for Those who think Luna and Celestia are Goddesses. Harmony become religion.

Hey! I love your story just from reading the first chapter!

I'm doing an audio version of the original fic and I think it would be cool to do a reading of something current as I'm uploading the old stuff, would that be something you're okay with

((ik this acc was made minutes before this comment, I'm just now getting back into the fandom and getting active on forums and the like))

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I cant physically stop you! :D

So long as you don't go claiming the story as your own or whatever then I'm Cool with it~
Fair warning I have no editor....other than Grammarly so... refinements will come down the road.
*also kinda feel like fan works are the literal badge of a successful story...*

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