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Does Helluva Boss have an overarching plot?
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Not exactly sure why you’re asking me, since the wiki’s a quick search away, but at least I’ll point you in it’s direction: https://hazbinhotel.fandom.com/wiki/Helluva_Boss.
This is your official review for the Furry Foray Festival Contest!
I've tried to be as objective as possible, but of course there are limits. I've tried to avoid being biased or arbitrary as much as I can, and hopefully I've succeeded at least somewhat. The full, final results will be announced on May 4th, and winners will be contacted shortly afterward to ask how they would like to accept their prizes. When readings these comments, please keep in mind that I know I'm often overly critical -- to the point where I can always find nitpicks even with the greatest works of literature. So don't take anything personally!
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and presumable scan itpresumably- I'm left a bit confused as to why Loona wanted to fuck Celestia...
- And also confused about what's going to happen after, now that the magic-restraining ring is broken. Celestia must have realized that Loona's voice is different than Luna's, right? Must be aware that some stranger just fucked her. So now is she going to be outraged about that and punish Loona? ... Or is she going to be incredibly turned on by that and want to be punished?
- Interesting choice ponifying Loona by giving her a pony disguise. Especially seeing her have to work within pony limitations.
- Still pretty unclear how Loona planned to kill Celestia (that was the plan, right?) Sure, I guess Loona could transform back into her hellhound form, and she's plenty formidable that way, even unarmed. But Celestia is also quite formidable, so it's hardly a sure thing. What the heck was Loona planning to do if she didn't find Celestia already asleep and restrained?
- With how fearful the guards were, I expected Celestia to be an absolute sex fiend who'd be the one dominating Loona -- the guards being too scared to go in there because they didn't want their asses hoofed. But the way it turned out, now I'm not sure why the guards were so fearful to go into Celestia's chambers. (Or why they'd let a stranger in there unescorted to be with their sleeping Princess.)
- Loona is really good at degrading dirty talk, though!
Scores:
Provocativeness: 55
Progression: 75
Payoff: 80
Pacing: 70
Personality: 40
Prose: 50
Total: 370
For more information on what these scores mean, see the scoring rubric.