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AleximusPrime


MLP artist and fanfic writer. Known for Flurry Heart's Story and My Little Sister is a Dragon.

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This story is a sequel to Flurry Heart's Story: Fillie Jean


After receiving some exciting news, Spike, Flurry Heart and her friends venture off to Nordo Dracos, where they find the Northern Drakes. These large, lovable dragons are ruled by a mighty king and live under the watchful eye of the mystical, living mountain: His Elevated Eminence. Will Spike finally get answers to where his family has been this entire time? He may get much more than what he bargained for!

Inspired by the official show, this is part of a fan-made sequel series I created called "Flurry Heart's Story", which documents the adventures of Flurry Heart as she makes friends and faces new and familiar villains, some of which may still be redeemable.

Next story: Oh Mother, Where Art Thou?

Flurry Heart's Story and its author are in no way associated with Hasbro or any of the creative team behind My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. This series is entirely fan-made and is created in honor of the official show. No copyright infringement is intended or encouraged. Please support the official release.

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Well, starting off strong right out of the gate! Buttercream's already made quite a name for herself, both in the storyverse, thanks to the video game, and from your adorable artwork of her, Alex, but here she is, in the scales (and the pudge, lol), meeting and blowing the minds of ponies who love playing as her! Night Shade might have turned out disappointing to Flurry and Pumpkin due to circumstances, but Butter? She's the real deal, and no mistake. Who wouldn't love her, and who wouldn't want a hug from her? =)

But wow...I was not expecting a revelation like that at the end. Buttercream is Spike's twin sister?! I didn't see that coming! Of course, you must've planned this from the start, without how similar they are in appearance. They both even grew up to be a pair of chubby and lovable butterballs. XD . Like I said, starting off really strong, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest goes! =)

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After the disappointment of what they went through in the last story, this one is a breath of fresh air for the kids and a very good time for Butter to show up!

And yup, she's his sister! I actually didn't have it planned right from the start exactly. She was originally supposed to have horns and be a Southern Drake, but I thought she looked cuter without them and not long after I created her, I thought I should have her be Spike's sister since I wanted to have Spike find his family anyway. This story might've been much later in the series if I hadn't been chomping at the bit to reveal this. XD

I was not expecting that, but it is welcome!

I also am entirely expecting some of the older ponies to treat Butters like a Sludge 2.0 what with the exposition dump making her sound not as believable. But we readers have met Butters before, so she's a-ok in my book!

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That could have been an issue, but she's already presented enough evidence and there will be more she'll talk about in chapter 2, whereas Sludge got a ton of things wrong like knowing Spike was a boy and when they asked him about all the plotholes with his story, he just cried and said he wished he had all the answers. Butter has actually done her homework here. Before this, she's taken weeks to get things around and look for her parents, and she had to talk to Celestia to figure out if Spike was the other missing purple egg.

I'm looking forward to what's in store!

Finally the best story of the year has begun!!

Oh wow, already hitting us in the feels with that revelation between Butters & Spike & unlike a certain slimeball (who shall remain nameless:twilightangry2:) she has proven to be on the up & up though her videogame fame! :moustache:

This was an awesome start Alex, looking forward to see what the next chapter will bring & how those 3 scale rascals that I saw on DA fit into the story!:pinkiehappy:

PS : Might even have a surprise for you regarding one of those 3! 😉

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Know what… I do wish that we had more adventures with Buttercream before but I do think the adult ponies should be cautious since they won’t want a repeat. Really I think Celestia should been there though a dna 🧬 check also helps.

I definitely agree Spike should had found his family in the show. Even just a sibling would had been fine.

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Yeah, don’t worry. She’s not a fake like that other guy. She’s the real deal!

We just might see em!

Oooh! Looking forward to that!

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True, true. Just seems like the exposition express kinda plowed straight into the conversation here. I do get that she's excited, and that she did a ton of prior research, but it tends to make the characters sound like they're info-dumping when you get to the long rambling explanations

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True. I wasn’t going to have her mention the roc, but I thought that would help to make it more believable. There’s more information she can give in the next chapter.

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Can't wait to hear it. Also really hope you draw Spike and Butters hugging, it would be adorable!

Already off to a wonderful start:heart::moustache:

Wow, I did not see that coming at all. Spike and Buttercream are twin siblings?! I guess it should have been a bit obvious in retrospect due to their similar body shapes.

A really heartwarming reveal. Plus Buttercream says she met her Dragon parents, meaning Spike can meet them too!

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Not everyone in Spike's family will have that physique, but wait till you see what his dad looks like!

Ponies of Equestria knew about her through a recent video game that had been released titled “Super Dragon Warriors” in which she was a playable character.

Super Smash Brothers reference gotta love it

“Yeah, especially after the other day,” Pumpkin added.

I'm so sorry you kids got in the middle of the hate crime of zeb and Svengallop you kids should not be involved in this all because of those who like to blame the sins of the fathers case in point Twilight and her friends

“It’s so awesome to see one of the Super Dragon Warriors characters here like this!” beamed Stormy as he flew around and examined Buttercream.

To be honest with you I would love to see that as well my favorite characters from Super Smash Brothers that'd be awesome

“Minus the polygons and the pixelated irises,” Chip added.

The good old days of the Nintendo 64 graphics love it lol

“It’s kind of a long story.”

Which apparently I need to read that so I get to know her a little bit better 😅

“I thought I never would either! I got pretty discouraged about it after that whole ordeal with Sludge, but Buttercream’s right: better now than never!”

I still can't believe he got away without facing the consequences of his action that one kind of angers me a little bit

Wow I got to say this was a pretty surprising event going on here wow so it was a pretty normal day but apparently there's a dragon showed up in Ponyville but it's not just any other dragon her name is buttercream which a lot of ponies and creatures knows her from that game she's in and she even Meet flurry heart and the rest of her friends and they were pretty excited to meet another famous creature after what happened the last time which that's still kind of upsets me but never mind apparently she has some news to talk with Spike and she told the kids what's up and with all that they tried to find Spike as fast as they can and once they found him buttercream was pretty nervous saying something to him but she has to or else she won't never get that off her chest she told him about the history of the eggs was stolen by a giant bird and it also turns out that these two are related to each other their brother and sisters in fact twins Spike couldn't believe it after all these years tried to figure out where he came from it came to him and he didn't want it to believe it after what happened with sludge but he knew this is real and he was pretty happy to see her I think it's a pretty nice family reunion and something tells me they got a lot of to catch up with what happened throughout their years guess we'll find out next time

I wish Spike and Buttercream could've met during the main story line. But this is just as good

also do the others meet Nightwatch?

Pinkie, clear your schedule for today. You've got a party to start!

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That actually hasn't been explained yet. It will come into play later in My Little Sister is a Dragon.

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Same. Would have been awesome if we got a character like her in the show. Of course it would have been great to see Spike meet ANY of his family in the show, but all we got was a fake father.

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Lol, Pinkie and Butter will be unstoppable together! XD

I have a feeling when Pinkie Pie heard that Spike and Buttercream are twins, she's gonna put on a " Spike reunites with his long lost sister" Party.

An excellent introduction to Spike’s family!

And the dragon lore just keeps on a-coming! So not only does Spike have even more siblings, but his parents are dragon royalty, making him a prince? In one day, Spike's gained a family he never knew he had, but had all along! Also, I had to look it up, and I see another callback to an earlier gen with His Elevated Eminence. A sentient mountain, huh? Interesting!
Seeing Spike reunite with his siblings and his mother was really sweet, especially since I just came from seeing your drawings of them pop up in my dA inbox. =)
And a dragon in rage mode that King Smite is dealing with? We've seen dragons who've undergone greed-induced bigness, but a state of rage? That sounds ominous...

“Oh Spike, you’ll love them! First there’s Singe: he’s a bit older than us and he’s the jokester and kid of the group. Then there’s Scorch: he’s a such lovable jock and is really good at wrestling. Then the oldest, Barb: she’s the responsible one and keeps the other two in line. They’re all really close and you should have seen how happy they were when they found out I was one of their long lost eggs!”

That must be the drawing that you introduce us in your artwork

“Wow really? Gosh, it must run deep in the...wait…did you say, king ? Our dad is a king? I’M A PRINCE?!”

Kind of reminds me of that same from Princess Diary

“A dragon that came to Ponyville years ago and told me he was my dad. His story wasn’t very convincing, but his tears managed to sway us. Turns out he wasn’t my dad, he just wanted to live in the castle and mooch off of us.”

The worst part is that he got away with it have we ever see him again there would be consequences

More cool lore regarding Spike's family & customs of the Northern Drakes, the adult designs of Spike/Butter sibs plus her mom were awesome!:raritystarry:

Wonder if Scorch/Singe would challenge Spike for some wrestle shenanigans? :twilightsheepish:

Looking forward to see his dad popping up soon, keep up the great work Alex!:moustache:

“Interesting. Celestia was too afraid to tell me about the roc until after I met one right when I got my wings. She didn’t know they’d be attracted to dragons going through their molt phase,” Spike explained. “It’s too bad she never figured out where I came from. If that roc was flying northwest, I’m guessing she went to Torch’s realm to ask them about me?”

Actually that theory is not that far off it kind of makes sense how they discover spikes's egg

“Gosh, we’re learning so much about dragon lore right now!” Flurry said as he took notes on a piece of paper.

Awww just like Twilight so excited to learn new things

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And there's more dragon lore to come! And yes, that is His Elevated Eminence from G1!

Ah, so you've figured out what "rage mode" is already! There will be more info about that later, but good observation!

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HA! I didn't realize that! I should have had him say "Me...a prince? SHUT. UP!"

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I did the best I could with it all. It makes the most sense to me how he could eventually find his parents yet somehow go for so long without doing it. There is more info as to how it happened that we'll read later on too.

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Thanks!

Lol, Singe and Scorch will want to test Spike's wrestling abilities at some point! It's important for Northern Drakes to know how to wrestle good when they reach adulthood and the reason why will be explained in the next chapter.

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well he did have to leave (albeit after stealing a single pillow).

Aww this was a pretty nice chapter so it looks like buttercream explained to spike about her family heritage and not only that he also have siblings three of them actually and their mom and dad are royalties so that makes Spike a prince which that blew my freaking mind but pretty awesome and there are about to go meet up with their family but flurry heart and the others wanted to go getting permission from their parents they let them hopefully they will be okay and they finally arrived to the dragon area where Spike and buttercream were born and it's much different from the Dragon Land so I can tell you that but still he even got the chance to meet his siblings and it's a pretty nice reunion and also his mother as well it's a pretty emotional reunion here as well but I wonder what the Kings reaction would be guess we'll find out next time

Also can't believe I forgot this part (besides the whole prince thing :twilightsheepish:)

“We never would have guessed it since me and my unicorn family didn’t know about them. Nightwatch found me in a forest and hatched my egg. Spike and I may be twins but Princess Celestia said Twilight used enough magic to cause Spike to hatch a bit earlier than expected. He’s two days older than I am.”

So Spike gets to be the big brother now (to Buttercream at least), not bad! :moustache:

Wow, Spike has a pretty big family. Not to mention the reveal that he was royalty the entire time! Pretty big reveal there, and a heartwarming reunion with most of his family. I am interested in Spike's dad now, since everyone says Spike looks a lot like him. Though for some reason I have a bad feeling these happy times won't last for long.

Sweet Mother of Twilight!

You mean Twilight Velvet?

That was another thing she kept from me when I was little and I can see why now. Twilight told her how I was venturing off to find the migratory dragons back when I was a kid. Celestia tried warning me by sending me a note through my magic fire, but then Garble scoffed when he read it and threw it into the lava.

Wow, now that's a callback. Interesting idea what was on that letter from Celestia Garble destroyed.

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