Fifteen Ciders Ago

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What started off as a wonderful night out with Rainbow and her very special somepony, ends with her in a bar, wondering what went wrong.

Based off of Deaf Pedestrians "15 Beers Ago"

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Regidar

Regidar #1 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

Well, this was fucking depressing.

Dr.Shisno

Dr.Shisno #2 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

1700971

Well, there's a sad tag for a reason

Vidatu

Vidatu #3 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

A bit short, but not bad at all.

I've always thought that RD would be the main character with the most at risk when it comes to romance. The more faithful a person, the harder they're hit when their partner isn't.

Flutter derp

Flutter derp #4 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

i cried

Öthnæar

Öthnæar #5 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

I was reading this because I was feeling depressed to begin with. After reading it, I no longer feel depressed. How does this have the opposite effect on me?! It's a good, depressing story. And it makes me happy. How strange...

Also, RD, you should know better than to drink and fly! Don't come crying to me when you pass out at 1,500 feet and crash because of it!

Derpy The Mailpony

Derpy The Mailpony #6 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

I don't know why, but I never get even remotely sad during stories with Sad tags. The only one that ever made me cry was... I can't recall the name.

Kapuchu

Kapuchu #7 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

1701563

I couldn't wake you, because you can never wake up again...

This shouldn't happen to be the name of the single story that made you cry?

Rainbow87dash

Rainbow87dash #8 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

1701563 same here the only one that made cry was My Little Dashie

GnollReader

GnollReader #9 · Nov 28th, 2012 · · ·

I like it, thumbs up!

Derpy The Mailpony

Derpy The Mailpony #10 · Nov 29th, 2012 · · ·

1701884 No, it was a romance w/ Spike and at the end he dies. This was literally my face:

Hodd

Hodd #11 · Nov 29th, 2012 · · ·

Wow, nicely written, and not too tragic. I also like how much elaboration went into her thoughts. Many authors simply leave a situation shallow, and do not fill it with any depth. This, however, seemed very real! Thumbed up!

Kapuchu

Kapuchu #12 · Nov 29th, 2012 · · ·

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Oh... Ouch ><

Anyway, try to other one I linked. I think that one would get you teary as well.

Derpy The Mailpony

Derpy The Mailpony #13 · Nov 29th, 2012 · · ·

1701943 I just read it. Still didn't cry. But every time I yawn my eyes water. lol

Derpy The Mailpony

Derpy The Mailpony #14 · Nov 29th, 2012 · · ·

1705894 I found it! Hormones by Flutterwhy4. Damn, I cried for hours after reading this! WARNING, it has some very... detailed... mature parts of Spike. Read at your on risk.

Kapuchu