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Con Los Terroristas


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Let's go through the list of cliches:
>Title that centers around a pun
>Gore fakeout
>Twilight/OC shipping

So, in short, did I like this?
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But the story isn't written badly despite a few errors here and there, like putting an exclamation point instead of a question mark and capitalizing a word after a semicolon. So, I won't dislike it.

You know Transylvania is in itself a very eldritch name. It literally means "The land beyond the forest". Okay I am not going to read this fic, I am just going to clarify what it means, it is a good name that doesn't really need to be changed to begin with, as it is already quite apt to this setting.
I don't think that Transsylvania is as mystical as it used to be, with the fall of the Ottoman empire and the general enlightenment movement and all that, but it really was quite something back in the day.

1511670 I was trying to figure a name that didn't involve Transylvania because that was an original concept and I decided to scrap it> the story now takes place in Las Pegasus and a few other places, still possibility to include Transylvania though.

Changed name ^.^

Chapter 2 will be out soon.

<Abandoned Story> So sorry, moving on to more exciting projects. :fluttershysad:

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