• Member Since 7th Jul, 2017
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Yalbach

I write about gay ponies.

Yalbach Joined 7th Jul, 2017 · Offline

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Mix-up
Mix-up #1 · Oct 17th, 2022 · · ·
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I really did enjoy the story, and how the gradual conditioning of Breaburn becoming from a fit straight stallion to a gay slob. I loved the descriptions and how subtle the mind alteration is presented. Keep it up dude, I am sure the next one will also be great.

Yalbach
Yalbach #2 · Oct 17th, 2022 · · ·
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
And thank you for cheering me on while I write it. I hope the next will be great as well.

Pixieon
Pixieon #3 · Nov 3rd, 2022 · · ·
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I really enjoyed the story, It was a fun read.

My only little gripe with it was whenever Braeburn said "Sugarcube" as that's kind of Applejack's thing. It was only said twice but it still gave me mental whiplash for a moment.

The rest though, was great. I'd love to read a sequel to this. Maybe get Applejack or her friends involved.

Yalbach
Yalbach #4 · Nov 4th, 2022 · · ·
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Ah, I figured that'd be the case, but I'm a fan of when any of the Apple Family says it.
As for sequels, we'll see if the idea strikes me. Sadly chances are low it'll ever involve any mares. :fluttercry:

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