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After the incident with Hoity Toity, Rarity spiraled into a deep depression. Her friends try everything they do to help her, but everything they do seems to worsen their friendship. She becomes bitter with her friends, and thinks of deciding to move hoping to become star with true friends.
Can the girls help Rarity and save their friendship, or will they lose their friend the element of generosity?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

How did Twilight and the other girls help with rarity originally? Because I forgot on what happened in the canon episode.

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They found the design and made the clothes themselves before the pageant started.

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Thank you.

P.S. Why do I get two dislikes for asking a simple question?

That was a interesting story. Goodluck with the rest of it.

Don't forget Spike, he was the announcer and seem to be stupid stupid, and practically point out it was Rarity who made the dresses, and was all her idea.
Yes Spike never meant to but..UGGGH!

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Thank you. Sometime this weekend I'll start on chapter two. Also thank you for reading!

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Oh, yea that's right! I'll remember to do that for the next chapter. Thanks for reading.

Any progress with next chapter? I'm eager to see Celestia teaching Spike and the rest of the Mane 6 the hard truth of what they had done.

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Ooooh, and I bet it ain't gonna be pretty for Twilight and friends by the looks of it.

Are you still writing?

Don't tell me this is how you're going to end the story. Also, I think you had everyone be way too harsh on Twilight and the others, as they immediately realized they did wrong when they were at the fashion show. No need to ridicule them like this, it's just...cruel. Rarity and Celestia at least need to realize they're going too far with their disappointment in Twilight and the others.

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