Gather around all you fillies, colts, mares, stallions, whatever you may be. I will regale you with old tails of the country
Rarity has long since left Ponyville and her former lover, Twilight, for a new life in Canterlot. One day while rearranging the library, Twilight comes across an old photo of her and Rarity, bringing back memories. Memories don't fade so easily, good or bad and the last memory both share is not a happy one. As Twilight looks at the picture, she has one question "Does she still think of me too?"
Brushy Bill has got another story for you, Does Ponyville Ever Cross Your Mind?
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This is a cute little story so far, cute and sad. My only complaint would be the mechanical errors throughout that got a bit distracting at times, but didn't drag the story down too much. I'll be looking forward to seeing how this ends.
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Hello friend,
I always appreciate your comments. In all, you say I have mechanical errors. I would appreciate it if you would private message me and point some out to me. If you can't or don't want to I understand, but I would like to see what you are seeing.
Thank you,
Brushy Bill