• Member Since 3rd Mar, 2022
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BrushyBill1881


Gather around all you fillies, colts, mares, stallions, whatever you may be. I will regale you with old tails of the country

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Big Mac and Cheerilee had a short fling, but it didn't seem to work out. One night while out at Ponyvilles local bar, Big Mac sees his old flame with someone new. How will he react and will he finally sees all that could've been? Letting go the past is hard, but it is a necessary step on moving on.
Come here and hear Brushy Bill's sad tale of I See It Now.

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Comments ( 2 )

This was a cute little story. A comfy premise that didn't drag on too long (though at the same time, it could have standed to be a tiny bit slower towards the end). It's always nice to see Big Mac get some character moments; my only complaint about that might be that we didn't see enough detail, but that's not that big of a deal.

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Thank you friend! This little story here didn't get much attention so it's nice to see someone who enjoyed! Thanks for the constructive criticism. I'll keep that in mind for future stories. I'm glad you liked it!
-Brushy Bill

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