• Member Since 18th Nov, 2021
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Silver_Cloudsky27


Every accomplishment begins with the decision to try

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Rainbow Dash wants her friends to experience flight and speed like her but she doesn't know how! Until she sees a strange machine being sold while she was on one of her wonderbolt tours.

This is a requested story:rainbowdetermined2:

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 1 )

This story was okay for a wacky comedy, not bad, but not particularly good either. The premise itself is funny, but the execution just seemed a bit predictable and didn't do as much as it could have. I would have preferred it if there was a bit more humor beyond just the wacky premise itself.

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