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Wow, this is similar to the one that Woz and Yabuki had mentioned this before about mares are overpopulating the stallions, but this is a new one in a twisted version.
I really love this story, but, if you are open to criticism, I would like to mention that your formatting is a little off.
For instance, in the same paragraph, you often have two separate characters speaking. For example;
Here, you have them in the same line, and it can get confusing to the reader who is speaking. A suggestion on how to make this flow clearer would be;
I hope to read more of this, because I am enjoying it, and I certainly hope you continue writing. It is always good to see someone learning a creative hobby like writing, and I think you should keep improving. 👍👍👍
Really liking it! Can’t wait for the Thorax chapter. I seriously don’t understand all the downvotes
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Thanks for the advice!!!!
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I know right?
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I always have more to give if you'd like it!
That was hot and the best gay sex script I have ever seen
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Thanks
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You're soo drip, its uncanny. I can't look away of your dripness.
I have a thing for characters with the drip jacket.
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A lot of the downvotes can just be attributed to people who just see M/M in the description and instantly dislike.