Trixie's Training

Trixie has never been very good at real magic. However now that she has a friend who is quite powerful, perhaps she can learn from her? (Takes place mid season 7. Recently edited to space out the story beats more)

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Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #1 · Jul 6th, 2022 · · ·

This was a good little story, and I enjoyed reading it. On a high level, I felt it was well-written. You clearly understand the characters you're working with and know how to use the chemistry between them to great effect. That being said, I still noticed quite a few mechanical errors throughout. It was less noticeable here than in your last story, but it's still something you should work on in the future.

ManeBrony

ManeBrony #2 · Jul 7th, 2022 · · ·

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Once again thank you so much for commenting, your words really mean a lot. I would appreciate it a lot if you could point out the errors you mentioned but if you'd rather not I'm sure I can comb through and find them. Either way thank you, your comment here is extremely helpful

Lulamoon-Crystal