They got to rent? Now thats the definition of a tourist trap.

It was a really nice story didn't see that twist coming in the end Kiernan, but that's even more reason to say thank you for making it.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it. When I pitched the story in a poll, I basically just pitched the ending.

This was a last-minute replacement for something else that would have caused a problem at that very moment.

Felt the sus, but it was still fun.

I was a little disappointed we weren't getting to see much of Flurry's internal thought process discovering the perversions of her kidnapper and the escalating sexual activity between them. Had me expecting just another "she gets so horny she wants to get raped" fic, so this chapter was definitely a pleasant surprise and explains why we couldn't see more of Flurry's thinking.

Also that cock sounds amazing

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I did consider, while writing this, delving into more of Flurry's thought processes, but it would have ruined the twist. I had to keep her thoughts inside of her head, or the reader would figure it out, and where's the surprise, then?

Glad you liked it.

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Use them accurately, got it!
"The systolic stillness of the cartilaginous cinder block was dumbfounding."

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Repaired.