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DocBlackP
Just a first time writer that has been reading on here for awhile and wanted to try my hand.
DocBlackP
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Already liking where this is going, And I love how the protag still thinks this is a dream. When I originally saw the notification for this I was very very skeptical at first for chapter 1. But you somehow have managed to make something that usually wouldn't work, In fact work.
Or even if each dissolved slime was worth 1 XP before modifiers, go find somewhere to hide for a year, then get to start with 25 million XP before reaching Level 2?
Thanks. Figured that the 1st chapter wouldn't sit well with most and hope people stay tuned as this one progress's. And yea there is going to be a lot saved up for when I get him to hit that button.
The idea is not bad, but the writing is very boring, especially the first chapter. The story is very long.
The first chapter screams "Well, have pity on the main character! He's so poor, so unhappy." At the same time, the more elements of his life are told, the less desire to feel sorry for him.
Let's see what happens next, but so far, for me personally, only a good idea draws the story.