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lordgriffin


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did not that expect a sequel but interesting. eager to see where this goes. in terms of stallions, only from the show, or could you need an OC?

11121977
I have been known to develop OC's when they fit oin, right now I am trying to remember how to post this story in the groups I am a member of.... Let me know what you think of the story :)

11121991
of course, i am sure i will enjoy it

11121977
I intend to stick mainly to the stallions from the show.... to include Shining Armor, Sombra, Stygian, Quibble plants, Sunburst ... a few others (Sorry Ijust never found Big Mac all that....)

11122253
Okay then, just thought if you need more stallions than the show provides or a more unique one

11122560
Tell me your idea :) Please :)

just so you can fix it. In this whole chapter you were spelling "Aria Blaze" like "Ariel Blaze" you may want to edit the story with her name's correct spelling. Aside from that, good strong opening now let's see how you follow up. Though i am sad that Abigail is working with Aria I was hoping for her to be possessed by her. Oh well, i look forward to your next chapter

11124250
As for Abby, Time will tell... there may be some twists favorable to your expectations in the GOOD ending.

Right now I am wrestling with how much clop to make the next chapters... I mean how many times can I write a human girl with a Pony Stallion..and how much of that is desired to be seen.

And yet, it has been eighteen months since this chapter was put out...
Dead fic?

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