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David M Coleman


I am an aspiring writer & blogger. — https://davidmc.io

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A lone human appears in Ponyville, and is immediately demonized by its inhabitants.
Follow the story of Anon as he adjusts to his new life in Equestria.


Story is second person. Tags will be updated as the story develops.

Book I: Arrival – Chapter One — Present (Artwork by Yakovlev-vad)


I'm looking for a proofreader. Please message me if interested.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

Are all of the artwork going to be made by Yakovlev-vad?

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Are all of the artwork going to be made by Yakovlev-vad?

Not really sure yet.

Not a bad start. As for the proofreader, I have read much, much worse stories when it comes to grammar.

Im looking forward to seeing where you're going to take us.

Monk
"The idea simply stated that when personal feelings are mixed with power, bad things happen." -Corvo

“First time?”

“No, I’ve been nervous lots of times.”

Good reference!

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Pretty decent so far. The only issue I can see is that it's a bit rushed so far.

Pretty good start so far. Can't wait to see where this goes.

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