an interesting fic

This entire story has very interesting ^{and hot} ideas from start to finish. The cultural angle is fantastic and leaves plenty of room for a full story if you get inspired. Whether this or something new, I hope you continue to write.

Lovely fic with foreign mores and culture, I wouldn't mind seeing you publish more chapters for this one.

Thanks for the share!

So this is an NTR fic? It was going so well until now, a real shame.

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Forgive me my ignorance, but what is NTR? (The only fitting TLA I know of for this story is AiE)

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How about the fact the MC watches as Big Mac f**ks Twilight and before you say they're not in a relationship so it doesn't count because in my opinion watching as a girl/mare you've f***ed gets Boned by someone else makes it count.

Quick Edit, I've reread your reply and realised that was a question i won't remove my origional reply because that seems cheap but NTR is when a character watches as his or her other half has sexual relations with another. Even though I'm 70ish percent everyone knows what NTR is I'm hoping i wasn't reading too much into the question and you weren't messing with me or something...

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Ah, so NTR is the same as cuckolding (or something to that effect)? I'm afraid the style in this story isn't taking anything too seriously.
Was hoping the Random tag would fit, but I'll update the description when I figure something out.

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Yeah NTR is short for Netorare which is a japanese word for cheating and or cuckolding but like I said in my reply what happens in your story would only losely fit because technically Anon and Twilight aren't/Weren't in an established relationship.