Many have always been afraid of the darkness. It would consume their souls. Send them into the world of fear. The world that you cannot escape the claws that will grasp you and take away dear life.
All you would see is the eyes of the predator as it feeds on your fear. In other cases, there would be no eyes at all. Just a faceless image that will always send you a clear message: Run, and fear the dark.
RUN...
Hey guys, this is gonna be another of my random projects. This one will bring up notable figures from our modern legends, like Slender Man and Jeff the Killer. Hope this is creepy enough for you.
Chapters (1)
Honestly, this should've been longer.
It's like: "Oh hey they're in the Everfree.
Oh hey there's Slenderman.
Oh hey there's Jeff the Killer." (By the way, how could you have Slendy kill Jeff? They're buds!)
"Oh hey we escaped."
There just needed to be more conflict.
More plot.
More dialogue.
Just more story in general is needed.
P.S. I still liked this story, despite this comment.
Great detail, but like Chuck said, more storyline. Although, the lack of it didn't stop me from being scared S***less. I swear, Slenderman is legitimately following me.
Slenderman AND Jeff the Killer you say? I am interested. Also, this:
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EDIT: Not bad, but as the others said, it was pretty short. Feels more like the prologue for a story involving the mane 6 investigating what's going on in the forest and with Slendermane and other creatures more so than a one shot. But for what it was, it wasn't half bad. 7/10, will give a thumbs up.
Same here I really am Looking forward to read this
but some words were a little off like 'All that they could see is darkness.' it sounded a little weird and unnatural, I would go back and try read what you have written once in a while, trust me it help 
Yes, 1226 words is a little short. Make more.
Now to read the story. Either though it's day I'm going to die if some person put a Jeff picture in here.
But now to bring light to that eyelid-less smiling bleached guy that is Jeff.
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Geez, I didn't expect all those pictures...
Anyways, I have taken all of your suggestions and I wil make it longer next time, and add some more to the plot.
Maybe the next one will involve the Rake....
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Aye, the Rake you say?
I'll watch for this new story.
1234722 good I want to see more
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No matter how many times I see "Go To Potato", it always catches me unawares, and I can't stop laughing for five minutes.
1234722 "All those pictures?" We only got two so far. We need more!
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And The Rake sounds good. One that focused on Jeff and not Slendy might not be too bad either.
Why slendy?
I thought we were buds
o_O