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Ah. Thank you for the fast reply.

And yes. My mistake. I said one thing but meant the other. Though I still think bloatsprites would have been mentioned in the survival guide. But who knows? Maybe it was missing few pages? Celestia knows raiders don't take proper care of their stuff.

Last bit I thought I'd mention is when Light gets angry in the second chapter. You describe her getting angry like six times in a row. While I'm sure her reprogrammed brain would be capable of getting really pissed from this having her children endangered maybe try to tone it down a tiny bit.

Other than that, great read, thank you.

Horrifying and hot in equal measure! Well done!