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Better than expected but not quite on the mark
Does Twilight wear an inhibitor ring around her horn to stop her from using magic?
9593259 Yes, I meant to include that.
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What was off with it? if you do not mind taking the time to tell me.
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Good. It's a simple matter to edit that little detail in. I've seen other slavery stories with inhibitor rings and it makes sense.
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The language, the mentality and my ban-worthy belief that fanfic writers shouldn't be coddled.
The language, I'm not getting into. I've been banned by enough authors already.
The mentality falls into cliche power fantasy hentai. And thats fine. I like power fantasy hentai. But power fantasy hentai is a writer's trap. Theres not much place you can go other than a series of meaningless bullshit and sex scenes once you establish a story as a power fantasy hentai.
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This is meant to be a porn story though. The plot is thin and there to add to the arousal factor and the sex scene is there so that that reaches a climax.
I'm very sorry that the story didn't please you, but I only got paid for so many thousand words, and I actually went beyond that to expand the shower scene XD.
As for the coddling part, I'm all for that. All my stories get massive numbers of downvotes just by people that don't bother to read them because they dislike the dark nature of them, which is fine and I'm never disabling voting. I'm more then aware a lot of people likely hate me, and that's fine too.
I noticed there was a lack of writers taking commissions for dark stuff, and I filled that gap. I love my side job and I wouldn't trade it for anything.
Finally, the language. I don't understand this, but if it made other writers ban you it must be funny.
This is good, please update.
I didn't expect that. I was expecting Celestia to be the mistress and never show weakness.
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I went with a more trollestia theme, as it is shown she does not get on much with the higher ups in society. Also, it's hot.
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I would expect a Trollestia. However I do like to see Celestia being a sophisticated mare. Taking glee in manipulating the ambassador and making him uncomfortable without making herself appear guilty at all.
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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As all writers say: Soon.
For real though, I just got a new computer and I had to move a lot of stuff over, but now I am settled in and ready to return to work.
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Never dead. Just sleeping. I will likely update it later today if I get around to it, although the next part has Twilight fighting in a kinky gladiator ring for the amusement of Luna and other higher ups, so I have no idea if people will like it.
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Awaken Dark Demon to fulfill your destiny!
Before you become known as Sleeping Beauty.
Update? Where are the rest of the Mane6?
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So I have an update ready, but it contains ghost sex, original characters and other really dumb stuff. I'm gonna see if I get the motivation to rewrite it because I know it'll blow the story up if I publish it as is.