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DILLYbOd


3D artist for The Overmare Studios and a writer of pony fics.

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awesome chapter mate cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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Thanks... will be posting more soon.

This is a rewrite of an older fanfic of mine.

Where can I read the old version?

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The overall story beats of the rewrite are smiliar to the old one... just more fleshed out... some chapters are the same as the old one..

I think I posted it on fanfiction... under another name. Not sure... didn't like how the old one turned out.

Okay I love this series! I cannot wait to see pinkie pie turn to pinkamena the savage the merciles. The machine won't hesitate to become a monster, but I do feel like a time skip is coming in

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She wont be super crazy Pinkamena. She will have some crazy, just more cold and calculating... But she has a way to go...

A little spoiler... Another event not at the camp will set her in motion, But Scarlet will leave a deep emotional scar.

“It’s their birthday.” Maud kept a stern face as she slowly eyed the mare, trying to make out her intentions.

Why would you tell this woman anything other than the obvious predator vibes he's giving off? Every other word out of my mouth would be a lie to her. Not stupid lies like I was told to be here but the announcement of the truth. Lies

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Maud thought telling the truth would be the right thing to do. Worried her sisters would be punished for a lie... little did she know.

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I guess it's understandable. The level of predatory behavior this mayor is sewing is usually signs of trauma in her own life.

The world around Nightingale faded as he stared off into space. ‘She’s pregnant?’ He questioned as he watched the cooked egg glisten in the light of his ceiling lamp. “Finishing up breakfast, then I’ll be on my way.” He hung up the phone. “You’re more trouble than you’re worth little missy…

Oh you almost got me. I was about to say surprisingly they care about children but I like you proved me wrong

I am generally surprised they care. Kind of odd that slave labor is okay but pregnancy changes anything

“She’s a slave now.” She loosened her grip on Pinkie. “She has to abide by new rules now.” She gave Marble a harsh stare. “No big sister, to give you gifts. No big sister to protect you.” She put her lips to Pinkie’s right ear. “Which means, I have you all to myself.” She seductively whispered before letting go of her. “Stay out of trouble.” She laughed as she walked back to her perch on the catwalk.

I have to admit this gave me shivers. It's the kind of cold heartedness I expect in my villains.

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Glad you're liking the story so far...
And the reason they 'care' is because of the the King's brother's laws...

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That would be a more legitimate answer if they weren't running slave camps and have actual slavery. But I guess baby steps. Not as worse as what the Pegasus are doing right wink:trixieshiftleft: I

Leaving the bakery, the sisters’ stepped onto the veranda. Buttoning up their wool coats, they looked up and down the street, watching putter-cars and wagons pass them by. Giving each other silent nods, they walked along the veranda towards the main intersection of their hometown of Ashmore.

I think the town name is Maybe a reference to secretforstudio Trevor Henderson animated series they did. The actual town in England   I think.  or this just could be a complete coincidence 

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A complete coincidence. 😆 I need to check it out.

“I’m… Free!” Pinkie laughed out loud. “I’m free!” She began to cry. “She can’t hurt me!” She sobbed, her voice cracking as she clung onto sister. “She… Can’t… Hurt… Me…” Marble stared wide eyed at the sobbing mess that was her sister. Holding back her own emotions she hugged her and let her sister unload her emotions. They stayed bound to each other until they heard a knock on the door.

We're about to see who's more crazy scarlet tracking her down after this or pinkie pie.

“Well, it may sound weird, but scientists have confirmed evolution is how this world’s intelligent and non-intelligent animals came to be.” Willow ran her fingers through Pinkie’s mane. “It’s also why some creatures are more superior to others.”

Okay here we go. I knew this was coming up. A little bit of unicorn supremacy going on around here. They coming surprise it took this long for this to really get out.

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See boys and girls. You need to find someone who loves you like Scarlet loves pinkie pie. But does not have all the other batshit crazy parts of her. And probably don't have the problems with the upper digits.

My Little Reviews & Feedback 2023 review.

also read chapter 19 just now. welp you going to have to wait for the update of the review...

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