Thorax a lone Worker drone, discovers the benefits of having Friendship and harmony to his people, he soon founded the Thoraxian party to promote harmony and Friendship. Though Queen Chrysalis and her other Queens, disgusted by his heretic preach, decides to oppress those who support his ideology.
Though it did not change their opinion that his ideology is worth fighting for, and so his people to stand against the Queen, Thorax plea his brother to join, he did. More Changelings joining the Thorax cause but may require a 'great and powerful' Ally to get a 'glimmer' of hope to win against Chrysalis, but Thorax himself would need to be 'Brave and Glorious' to inspire his people and finally end the Cruel reign of Chrysalis
(this is my second fanfic enjoy)
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
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So, this is BEFORE the "Geat War" with Equestria/Ponies vs Changelings in the Equestria at War verse? ( Did Chrysalis still take the Deer's country? )
You know, maybe it can even be prevented, and have a more hopeful future?
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Thank you!
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Yes this is before the events of eaw and this part is criticism for the eventual conflicts in the future
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"Criticism"? Basically, it has something to do that the ponies themselves could have easily prevented the "Great War", if they have interfered earlier like aiding Thorax's rebellion for example?
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That is a possibility but it could be end up as failure and Great War procceds
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Hmm.
The premise is very interesting. This story has a great potential. The only problem is the grammar which is confusing at times.