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lillytheomegawolf


I enjoy reading and writing cute ponies. If my works brighten up your day, even better.

Comments ( 4 )

Short, sweet and creative with the scenes. For a joke fic at least it kept it straight to the point and kept me guessing on what chaotic thing would happen next. Wish more people wrote this pairing cause the creativity of Discord lends itself well in keeping stories like this to be at least memorable and fun. And it was a great ending with an explosive climax. Loved it a ton. And Luna and Twilight having their own session, while subdued kept a nice balance between the pairs moments. Weird how such a story like this can be both cute and funny at the same time while being super random, but I think it worked out well.

My only real complaint is the ever more creative substitutes for referencing parts and actions, but I do get the idea.

This would have gotten a fav and upvote if it weren't for the TwiLuna. With that, sadly, I am forced to downvote.

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Wow your really gonna down vote on a entire fic cus it had Twiluna it was only mentioned what 2 or 3 times? You really hate it that much?

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