( This is a story set post Princess twilight, but before the elements are lost.)
Equestria Is facing an enemy like no other, violent monsters are appearing across the entire kingdom. The Equestrian guards are overwhelmed and unprepared to face such a threat, They need help. To fight this evil, The princesses will summon three beings from where these monsters are from to help them.
Through struggles both personal and external, will this be enough to save Equestria from the horrors of war? Equestria and its heroes will need to change, because as everyone knows, War never changes.
it is very good as far as I look forward to more good luck at university
I’m looking forward to more its great so far
Another settlement need your help?
Please assume the position
https://youtu.be/Yze_har7eXs
Your headed the right way for a spot on the favorite shelf
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Believe it or not, The lack of feedback has been a killer of motivation. I do intend to get back into the swing of things, but something as simple as comments really does help!
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Yes yes yes I’m so happy to see a new chapter in the story
This always goes through my head when some military guys are flying
https://youtu.be/eFFgbc5Vcbw
Captain
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Much appreciated
Nice story and chapter, looking forward to the next chapter.
The excitement, Feral ghouls I knew it
That was a good battle
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I rewrote the opening chapter's... opening... you might want to give it a look.
Damn you and your cliffhangers!
Whoa what a chapter that was insane
Chicago? Which entry is that? Is that Fallout 3 post Broken Steel, or some other entry?
Nate in Canterlot, Courier Six in Appleloosa, and our unknown in the Everfree.
Please continue....
Half a bottle of scotch? Yeah, you are definitely going to make poor choices with that kind of inebriation.
And so, from the mouth of the Sole Survivor, the ponies learn some history. Can't wait to see what happens next!
So it seems John is the reluctant type. Color me intrigued!
Hmmm......
He still has the Platinum Chip, so it doesn't seem like he sided with House or Yes Man....
And the armor he's wearing.... I'm going to guess NCR-allegiant.
Me when I see a new update
https://youtu.be/m6UY5ZX9-FI
Okay, so John is clearly a very bitter, angry man. I'm very curious how this new development will go, with John teaching Twilight how to fight.
Do you mean "emanating from"?
By GOD, that was a manic battle!
I LOVED IT!!!!
And I am ALL CAUGHT UP!!
Really hoping you can continue this on a regular-ish basis. Although, of course, I understand if life gets in the way sometimes.
Looking forward to more!
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fixed, thank you!
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Spoilers!... well not really, but I will be addressing that eventually.
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Spoilers! consider it part of the long game.
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Don't worry, I'm not going anywhere soon. However, I will be on hold for a while as I got back and rewrite the old chapters since there are a lot of viewers who drop out on the early ones. And I also need to write up some character dossier to help keep track of what parts I've covered and when. However, with Uni on hold for the end-year break and no outstanding tasks, I have the time, In the meantime, feel free to drop any ideas or criticism. The story is going to become a wee bit serialised going forward into mini adventures and sub plots, as well as some slice of life mixed in with major plot chapters. If you have a scenario you are interested in seeing explored, I may try and fit it in when it seems apropriate.
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Yes, well hopefully I will be able to crank out more in the next few months than I have in the last few. University has a way of putting everything on hold.
Oh Fluttershy
Fluttershy is not so weak as you think Twilight. She can speak with the animals but she is not an idiot.
Cool idea for a story loving it so far
Great chapter loving it
Could you drop the "Under-Snore" and swap it for a "[ hr ]"
[ hr ]
to minimize the disrupåtiveness?
The name "Rarity" requires Capitalization, or it is no longer the name of the Pony.
Yes, that just happened and Pinkie is just being Pinkie.. again!
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Much appreciated, tiss the small things that you miss.
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I'm afraid the underscore is used throughout the story as a scene changer, to change it now would require a rework of the whole thing. sorry
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Hopefully some tinkering I just did makes it sit better.
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if it is a consistent issue, all the more important to adjust now. (unless you don't care about the reader experience) and unless you copy and past, this is also a needless work to write each time.
Assuming this is the only story, but consider changing this "format" for the next story at the very least.
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yes, hopefully.
3 AM just as I am about to lay down to go to bed, and this chapter finally drops huh
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It was that moment the sole survivor found true freedom