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FIRE FLASH 3


Just a French guy trying to write interesting stories, Making films and writing are my passions

Comments ( 9 )

Your writing style is interesting,sometimes i almost felt reading a 20 or 19 century's novel made by papers.Sometimes i saw it as a lyric.It's a new feeling for .but it not offend me,on the contrary,it's good.Until now I'm not read the prequel of this book,i guess should to read it.
In a word,good job,thank for you bring these interesting chapters for us.:trollestia:

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Thank you for the critique and I am glad you have seen it that way. Be warned, I wrote the prequel when I was in high school and is probably a little edgy and hard to take seriously but I don't plan on changing it because I want people to make their critique of my improvements or not.

how exactly is the shadow interrogating spike last chapter if he's been with Twilight this entire time?

Mmmm Chysalis having a crush Oooooooooh~~ ~~

This sorta reminds me of the El Goonish Shive comic with the immortals. They'd do a sort of reset on themselves every now and then because otherwise they just keep getting more powerful and less stable.

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I am not familiar with the comic. Is this in comparison with "The Shadow" or the protagonists?

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Galaxia. Immortals getting bored and start doing messed up things. The reset they'd do would sort of make them like a teen again and they'd more or less forget all their life experiences, but they'd remember them like being read in a book rather than doing it themselves so they could in in a way live each experience new again. They'd call it dying, but not quite as much as us mere mortals. Though they could also die improperly because the death thing was a process and having it done wrong would leave the immortal all sorts of goofed up, but not in the end the world sort of way.

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Ah, at least I never claimed my story to be original! :twilightsheepish:
Thanks for the info, it was not my intention for building up such a remarkable ressemblance, but I hope it was to your enjoyment.

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