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FIRE FLASH 3


Just a French guy trying to write interesting stories, Making films and writing are my passions

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Twilight Sparkle, former student of Princess Celestia and now the princess of Magic, decides to build a machine to allow ponies to do research on other planets and dimensions. But when activated, the Mirror released an acient spirit, locked away within the subconscious even before Celestia's rise to power. Having been able to watch the world change, he decides to trap Twilight in another Universe and change Equus's History to suit his needs.
Twilight, now lost in an unknown environment, must find a way home and fight for Equestria's freedom. But this is Earth, 1942, and things aren't going to be as easy or as kind as she would like to believe.

Set in between Season 3 and 4, the timeline will not suit all of the remaining seasons.

A special thanks to mr xlu for proofreading this story. I could not be here writing this story without him.

All of the characters in this story are purely fictional as are most of the engagements.

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 75 )

What is this a crossover of?

7222183 Sorry, my mistake I just found out it has to be a crossover between MLP:FIM & EQG (which this story does not cover). Sorry if this has been a bother to you, I will remove it imidiatly to not confuse other readers.

need an editor to correct the grammar

7298179 Yeah I know, its pretty hard since I've never been to an English school, but I will try.
Je vous le promets

I think I sprained my tow I'm in pain will proofread s soon

yes twilight now you can perform death from above

Whats happend to twilight!?

7748799 hopefully I'll describe what's happened to Twilight in the next chapter ;)

7818205 Joyeux Noël et un bon Nouvel Ans! Or Happy Hearth's Warming, or merry Christmas and a happy New Years!

I noticed I was not following you because of this story.

I am now following you.

If I recall correctly, the Japanese fell to hubris and get their asses kicked in due course.

8122370 It wasn't a problem, I hope you still enjoy the story.

8123261 I wanted to show the self-confidence of the Japanese in this story, but I'm not that good of a writer to express something like that when it only talks about the USMC

i was right ,this is one fine story! it is such a great read. well done.

8125773 Thanks, I'll try and keep up to your expectations.

man what a great story! i hope lou nthinks about b going on a recon patrol as a cover for helping twilight reach the portal or if that does not work maybe discord and the doctor can come up with a way to get twilight and the squad into equestria. i know you have taught that out already ,and what makes this such a fine story it is because we really care aboutevery pony and every person, that is what makes this such a great story!!

8127637 Well I don't want to spoil anything, and there a few more chapters until we reach that part of the story.

Though I'm glad that you enjoy my story so much :twilightsmile:

man what an intense chapter! my heart was pounding while i read it!well done once again to you on this fine story!thank you for a great read!

Awww, Twilight really wants a photo though!

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Think shed fix up a few more weapons?

man this chapter was so good! it was so funny,but the ending hitting like a block buster! poor louhe just cant catch a break! well done sir well done!

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Thank you, it's nice to know that you like it. :pinkiehappy:

Wow this almost made Me cry.

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When I finished writing this chapter, I recited the story to myself during a walk round my village. And I cried :fluttercry:

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*hug* i Know i loved all the caracters to.

this was so powerful and heart breaking!you makeus care so deeply for the characters its like they are family.well done to you for such powerful writing!

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Thank you sooooooo much, it means a lot to me. I have done to the best of my ability to ake these characters as 3 dimensional as possible

this chapter was the very best!man the emotions and feels were just fantastic! well done to you, this continues to be one of my all time favorite stories on fim bar none!

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Thank you so much. I will try and continue to make the next chapters as enjoyable as this one.

I'm so pleased to have people like you reading my story :twilightsmile:

Really calling himself the shadow... Doesn't he know that name is already taken by a hero who knows the weed of crime bears bitter fruit and that bad things tend to happen to those who do evil in his name...

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Weeeeeeell.... You know... bad guys and bad surnames. :twilightsheepish:

I do intend to give some back story on this vilain in the sequel. Though the name is partially caused by vengeance and the fact that he has forgotten his original name. :twilightsmile:

Is the guy suffering from some sort of severe fatigue or the like? I get the feeling hes disjointed (or the formatting got messed up royally)

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Do you mean the main character? if so, yes. He's suffering from sleep deprevation.

so great to see and another great chapter.thank you for a most powerful and gripping chapter! well done!

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Awww thanks, I really like all of your support! :twilightsmile:

So many feels! Great job man, though there are a few spelling mistakes, but other than that it was great :twilightsmile:

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Ah... well you see, normally I would re-read the story over and over again for mistakes, but I've been so cought up with writing my end of year script and lego star trek series that I kinda didn't have much time.

another exciting and powerful chapter.as always each chapter is well worth the wait!and merry christmas too you!

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Thank you sooooo much. :twilightsmile:

Merry christmas to you and thanks again!

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