On one faithful day in Equestria, when the sirens reigned supreme...
One stallion named Tenor Nocturne, has been reborn as siren.
On one faithful day in Equestria, when the sirens reigned supreme...
One stallion named Tenor Nocturne, has been reborn as siren.
I like it I think you are a good writer.
Your writing contains good descriptive language and has a lot of potential! The only thing you might need to work on is not rushing, or going overboard on a single moment. I encourage you to keep writing. The more you write the more you will learn!
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Thanks. Now that school has ended for winter vacation, I should be able to not rush my stories. Thanks again.