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how similar to your other story is this and by that I mean is it going to get past a single chapter update.

other than that; is that timberjack and nice to see zecora still has her senses FOR NOW as that could change.
I hope she and Charles have a nice expository conversation about what's going on away from the wolf monster girl hybrid.

This was a fun and interesting beginning I hope we see that timber women again but as a friend/mate.

Are you going to finish this story

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Already making another chapter :)

Can't wait to read the next chapter. The protagonist just arrived in the forest and immediatly gets jumped by timber pony lol. Awesome work.

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Its also a awesome chapter to, I can't wait to see how the other characters react to him.

This was a sweet and fun chapter with him and Zecora and Twilight and more. I hope he makes a herd/harem. I can't wait to see where this go's .

This story looks interesting, I hope you can write more chapters and see how this is going.

awesome chapter keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

for a moment I read "Bro tits" not "Bro fist" lol

I really like where this is going. I really hope you're working on the new chapter right now cause I'd like to see how Ian enjoys his new sex life

what happened, until recently chapter 3 was uploaded but now its gone, was it uploaded by mistake?

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Oh my bad, I was editing some things and forgot to republish, many sorries

Are you going to finish the story

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Yes, currently making chapter 4

Twilight's acting pretty sus, I wouldn't trust her. Best to stay with the naked woman who can keep her shit together when your naked.

that non-con tag has me still thinking that mares down to fuck with no strings attached is too good to be true, that and me wanting this to be a porn with plot story.
Instead of just mindless clop.

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Fighting for your freedom against demonic invaders isn't a good enough plot? And, Ian isn't going to straight up go fuck everypony that he sees, some aren't horny as Starlight. Yer comment shook me a bit

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wait, there's going to be demon invaders and a plot. I need to add this to my tracking list.
The fact that not even 24 hours after entering ponyville that there's a mare down to fuck is pretty sus in itself which added to the fact they barely got past first name basis.

Plus even Zecora causally dropped 'stallions MUST breed all that he can in or outside of a clan in chapter 2.

unless stated, going to assume there are desperate mares out there that kidnap lone stallions for reasons.

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Ops, I wasn't supposed to tell that. More stuff will happen in the Chapter 4, can't tell more spoilers.

Chapter with some revelations today

This was a awesomely spicy and chill chapter,this just keeps getting better and better as it goes.

This was a epic lore chapter I can't wait to see who joins his herd first,I hope both princess join.

That was an interesting chapter by including the lore of the setting, I really love to learn how was possible a human ended up in Equestria. Please, keep working cause I wanna see more of this.

This and a beyond epic fun and interesting chapter. I hope all the apples can and will join his herd.

If you can dodge a ball you can dodge laser beam

Not letting him sleep in the car was stupid. Let him conserve energy till you need him.

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I'm confused as Admiral is; how did Ian and his family get to the camping place? Cos there was a 'LONG DRIVE' involved.

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The car wasn't sucked into the portal with Ian

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no i never said anything about a PORTAL.

I asked HOW did they get to the CAMPING AREA.

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ok now im HELLA confused, Admiral said something about 'Not letting him sleep in the car was stupid.'

And then you were like 'What? Car?'

I'm pretty sure he was talking about how they got the Camping area, NOT to Equestria

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I got confused by he saying 'not letting him sleep in the car was stupid' but WHEN he could sleep in the car, the only moment he could sleep is before going to the portal, and they were in the middle of a camping trip to drag Ian

Great work keep it up

This was a beyond epically spicy chapter.

chapter felt rushed

I raised my eyebrow at her hastiness, but I decided to ignore it as a quirk of hers, “Alright then. If you excuse me, I’m going to nap.”

At that point I would have said no and then walked away p

any chance this chapter is getting updated?

been over a year and a half.

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I doubt it Writer has been gone for over two years Who knows what happened to them all the other socials are also inactive

Damn! Be more tactful dude! You shouldn't begin a sexual escapade right after you ordered food.

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