• Member Since 15th Aug, 2020
  • offline last seen Sep 3rd, 2020

solar star


Hi I'm new and obsessed with AppleDash.

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This is a story of Applejack and Rainbow getting caught engaged in some personal activity, to say the least, by the rest of mane 6, and everything that led up to it. Sex implied.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 11 )

the scene where Chrysalis is defeated APPLEJACK HELPS RAINBOW OUT OF THEIR GOO THINGY WHILE EVERYONE ELSE GETS UP ALONE

HAHAHHH SAME I LOVED THAT SCENE! appledash is so frigging cute

Think the rating could be higher, but the implications are preeetty obvious from the title, description and cover image. I think you're good to go!

I do hope to see more of this little tale. Soon. It's really good and cute and just downright sweet thus far!

Oh yeah, the 4th chapter is definitely pushing the boundaries with that T rating, methinks, but I suppose it should be fine? Maybe? Possibly? I'm sure the mods will correct things if they disagree.

Or perhaps it was just another moment where her heart was in a place her brain had yet to accept.

^ Favorite line in the whole story thus far. Really speaks to the hopeless romantic within me.

"APPLEJACK!" Apple Bloom screamed. Applejack's eyes flew open. As Apple Bloom stared at her, she tried to piece her surroundings together. She was in her bedroom, Apple Bloom was at the front of her bed staring at her, she was still laying under the covers, but she was also sweating, and breathing a bit heavily. One hoof was holding her blanket, and the other was down below rubbing her––

"AGHH!" Applejack screamed as she sat up in her bed.

"APPLE BLOOM?! What are ya doin' in here?!" Applejack half screamed half talked, trying to sound collected but failing. It was hard to focus when one of your hoofs was down there...solving a problem...of sorts. She held her blanket tightly to her chest.

"Ya know yer suppose' to knoCK!" Against her own wishes AJ's voice squeaked, her nerves going haywire. She was hoping Apple Bloom couldn't see the sweat dripping on her face.

A good thing Apple Bloom didn’t notice. :rainbowlaugh:

This is good, especially for your first story. Though if you feel the need to adjust the rating in later chapters, by all means do.

Look forward to seeing how you finish it.

Can't wait until you update lovely!

I am going to rewatch the season six finale just to find that extra little detail now.

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haha yes do it!! there are so many appledash moments I missed the first time around

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thank you!!! I really appreciate it:) and yea I added 'sex' to the tags to give a better heads up. I'll prob leave at T unless someone says something?? definitely will switch to M if needed

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wow thank you so so much. If I don't get writers block I will try to update soon hahah. and yea I added 'sex' to the tags so hopefully that gives a better heads up. if only there was a T+ option haha. will change to M if necessary !!

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In the event it does it’ll be my first Appledash story in that category.

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